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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oboy.
wow.
this is GREAT. I tripped over the story and couldn't stop reading it until I got to ..well, hopefully not the end.
I LOVE this! great everything!
One tiny tiny thing - hair-brushing scene -- I think you've gotten the clothing on the wrong brothers.
More more please... I really like the setup and the way the story's progressing. I feel sorry for the poor houshi, but oh well. So sad too bad. Now Fluffy's getting the goods. Keep up the good work, and I hope to see additional chappies soon....
wow.
this is GREAT. I tripped over the story and couldn't stop reading it until I got to ..well, hopefully not the end.
I LOVE this! great everything!
One tiny tiny thing - hair-brushing scene -- I think you've gotten the clothing on the wrong brothers.
More more please... I really like the setup and the way the story's progressing. I feel sorry for the poor houshi, but oh well. So sad too bad. Now Fluffy's getting the goods. Keep up the good work, and I hope to see additional chappies soon....
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i must say this is one of the best stories i have read in a long time!! bravo. =) i am sorry i am only now reviewing, well first because i have only just found your story. second, i couldn't stop reading. it is truly wonderful!! thanks so much for sharing.
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good story. Have you put this in the Sess/Sango section? More people will get to read it, and I'm sure that, with a sotry as goos as this, there will be a lot of rewiew (I think that almost every writer love rewiews, I myself LOVE them).
The story was not rushed, tha pace was really good, it was really well-written. You made the lemons tastefully. I really liked how you present first him gentle with her, and after, when his desire increases to the point he can't bear with it, their 'love making' (or whatever it is at this time) is more ferocious, animal, more passionate.
Keep on woth the excellent work you have been doing until now.
Bye!
The story was not rushed, tha pace was really good, it was really well-written. You made the lemons tastefully. I really liked how you present first him gentle with her, and after, when his desire increases to the point he can't bear with it, their 'love making' (or whatever it is at this time) is more ferocious, animal, more passionate.
Keep on woth the excellent work you have been doing until now.
Bye!
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good story. It is amazing how you are able to keep Sesshomaru in character at the sametime make him do something that is very out of character (like falling in love with Sango). You are an amazing writer to be able to pull of something like this, the be able to make Sesshomaru fall in love with Sango in his very unique way. I personally find it quite enjoyable that Sesshomaru did not try to romanticize Sango or to charm her like many other authors have attempted to do in their stories, but rather in your story Sesshomaru had a rather detacted and methodical approach to it. Reflicting perfectly his youkai (inhuman) nature. I certainly hope that you enjoyed writing this story as much as I enjoyed reading it. Good luck on your next chapter.
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating fast! I love this story!
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're awesome. Sess x San is so hard to come by! Thanks a bunch for writing one I love your style of writing!
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, great job with the new chapter. You always kept them in character and that's really excellent in a writer. Vivid details make the scenes come alive in your story. But damn, I'm going to go through an entire pack of cigarettes if you keep this stuff up! :P
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why did you move this out of the Sesshoumaru+ Sango section?
This is just too damnded good! It's not right that you have so few reveiws. You deserve much MORE then this!
This is just too damnded good! It's not right that you have so few reveiws. You deserve much MORE then this!
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You do a very good job here - you keep them all in character and give vivid detail in your story. Most satisfactory - keep up the good work! :)
I need a cigarette...
I need a cigarette...