AFF Fiction Portal
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! You REALLY have to continue this, make it into a looooooong awesome story. You've got so much potential, this story was made to be continued don't ignore it!!!! (and please add MPreg and some hard core smex for this lovely piece.) Keep up the AMAZING work!!
person gen
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
knowledge of the sun makes a
nice sequel to secrets of the moon.
wont you complete your arcs with ...
something like - beginning of tomorrow?
wherein the promise is finally fulfilled?

i thought a trilogy would balance your pair very nicely.

you can make it a short one (about several paragraphs of naraku, and the rest
can be how they finally get together? and maybe something else...=) ...)

yes?

just wanting a nice ending, i guess
person reb Riddle
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story was the kind that moves cities it was wonderful poetic and dramatically romantic what I wouldn’t give to have a man talk like that to me... I just wanted to say that this story has touched me deeply and I thank you for creating and sharing this masterpiece of the righting art.
person sess-koi
schedule May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more, More, MORE!!!!
person GrayWolf
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
um.. that was really short..o_O you should have written more discription. but i guess its good
person GrayWolf
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
blah.. i like it..sorta shouldn't it be rated R there is no sex in it :(
person GrayWolf
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my bad again! hahhahaha sorry just woke up from a nap. it is XD ^_____^ gah.. im so out of it hahaha :|
person Snowfall
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
These are good, but I'm wondering why you don't load the chapters together as a single fic. They appear incomplete otherwise.

Snowfall
person Fluffy
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,. wow. I love this. Very well writen. Just one question...Why different story parts...Why not just place it all in one...It seems less confussing Specially sicne it is the same story...Just a curious question...LOL You might have your reasons I don't know.... Anyways I'll be looking for your next part. ^_^
person PolkaDot
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's an old concept but I like it. Sesshy's still being a bit of a jackass, that's totally his way.