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for In Thy Orisons

by OpheliaUndone

person Qiana
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was good update soon please
person little-tee
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DUUUDE!!!! THIS STORY IS KICKIN LIKE HOT SUACEON CHICKEN!!!!!!!!
*grins* and i like how fluffy is goin at her. it makes it sound like he cant control homself.
*blushes* sorry im a perv but then again who isnt if there on this site!!!! LOL!!!!
anywho i love the story. keep up the good work and i hope u update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
until l8er i say ' cheerio-darling, cheerio!!!!!'
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"gives puppy eyes" please more chapters ill do any thing "gives more puppy eyes"
person Inara Reynolds
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool. I got a thank you. So if they are dog demon's, then does that mean their spawn would be puppies?
person jadefeather
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow! So eloquent! Very rare for an author here. You must update soon! I love it!
person lensa
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love Sesshy! I like the way you keep in character, cold and oh so sexy. Please update soon.

(I know not a real review, more like a plea. My only complaint is that I wish your chapters were longer, but hey I'll take what I can get)

Lensa
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY you updated FINALLY! lol loved the new chap even though it could have been longer. update soon!
person ivorycoral
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. These first two chapters are a great hook, and beautifully written. You've got your readers hooked, so let us know what happens next! You've piqued my curiousity!
Best of luck go with you, and all the Muses
ivorycoral
person Celes Prye
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Noooo! *sniffle* I wanna know what he siad! *pout* plz plz update soon O.O pwetty pweeze with a Sessy on top? =)
person Good Apollo, I am Burning
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it. It is always really hard to find believable Sesshomaru/Kagome stories these days. I salute you for the realness of the characters.