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for In Thy Orisons

by OpheliaUndone

person Angie
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ugg.. why are these great chapts. so short?
Do you enjoy tormenting you readers... ... i bet ya do...lol
hahah umm dont make me put gum in ur hair. update soon. ..(plzplz plz make them longer)
person JadedInu
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay you got me hooked. I am dying to know what he whispered in her ear!
person Seren1tystar01
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. I just wanted to let you know that I absolutely love your story. It is unique so far and very well written. The only criticism I could have for your story would be the length. The length of the chapters doesn't allow for much in the way of plot to be written. I hope that you update quickly and that eventually your chapters get longer. Good work and I hope you update soon.
Seren1tystar01
person szaugglaughs
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woooo hoooo. Okay, I'm tingling in unmentionable places. Nice idea for the revenge thing...Sesshoumaru is such a bastard...cool;-) looking forward to the next chapter tremendously.
person angel
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .... later for now

angel
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I get chills (the good kind) just thinking about what Sessy has in store for Kagome...
I can't wait to read the next part. ;o)

great story, btw... :O)
person [AnoxiaSan]
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooo.. Please write more. Ye story was very good. Continue please >3!
person Lady Light
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHOOOOO, smokin, love your story, chapters could be longer Update, Pretty Please. I'll give you a dollar... pout, Please...
person alli
schedule May 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start!! i can't wait to see what happens!! but could you email me and tell me if your continuing please i'de really appreciate it! :)
person akia
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is awesome so far, i really hope you update soon, especially with the cliffy (you meany lol)