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Good, Hiei finally pulled his head out of his ass and made Kagome his mate. Now let's see if he can keep her and become less of a jerk. Update soon.

Let me guess on Kagome's children. One is Shippo and the other is Miruko?

Please update soon.

Good chapter. I like the use of the vorseth. Poor Kagome just ca't win, at least the guys got there in tmie to save her. I really like the use of humor in your story too. That line about Hiei bending over was soo funny, and really lightend the mood a little. Please continue on you've really got a good story here. Plus I've gotta know who Kagome's children are. At first I was thinking one was Shippo, but now I don't know. Maybe Miroku and Sango? It would be cool if Kurama and Yukina's was Kuronue, but anything you do I'm sure will be great. Update soon!

You're welcome, I'm glad you liked our creations enough to want to use them. I imagaine that Mom and Dad aren't going to be too happy that Hiei killed one of their kids, not that they'll object for long. I'm sure they'll end up dying too. The banter back and forth between Hiei and Youko is amusing, I get the feeling they don't much like each other lol Good chapter, I look forward to reading more. Update soon please

I like, it sounds like something that I would do. Please continue, I an looking forward to what lovely evil things you will do to our darling Hiei next.

write more please thankyou its a wonderful story

What happened???? Well shit-kabobs, wtf kind of cliffie is that? Teach them not to leave the girls alone. Cant wait for the next chapter, please update soon. *hands you Aoshi and Kurama cookies*

that was good
UPDATE SOON!!!

hehe, love this story, i cant wait to find out who got reincarnated as kagomes children! lol, a jealous inu-hanyou as her son?!! too funny

I hate evil cliffies, oh well the last two chapters were excellent. Hiei brought her home a puppy, even if it was by accident, it was still cute. Update soon!