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person Ryukotsusei
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh what an untimely interruption! Kagome is such a tease, I can't wait to see what punishment Hiei has in mind for her once they get home. I'm betting he's already plotting exactly what he can do to her. Good job of having Kurama weasel his way out of trouble with his mother, though I'm sure Kagome and Hiei aren't finished with his punishement yet. Good chapter, update soon please
person Ryukotsusei
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter as always. You had me laughing uncontrollably as I read this. I have to wonder who is going to end up dying first. Hiei, for being stupid enough to listen to Youko. Youko, for giving such bad advice. Yusuke, just for being in the wrong place at the wrong time andthen setting Kurama up. Or Kurama, having a heart attack for having to explain this to his mother. Poor Yukina, not knowing what in the hell that is going on. Obviously Kurama didn't explain to her the situation about him and his mother. Now our Fox is going to have to do some fancy footwork to keep all hell from breaking loose. If I were Yusuke, I'd run for cover now. When Shiori leaves I have a feeling he's a dead man. Assuming Kagome doesn't save him by confronting Kurama about Youko's bad advice. I can't see this confrontation ending well lol. I can't wait to read more, Update soon please.
person Diane
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL, this is fun & I can hardly wait to see who does what next.
person Badkitty
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Youko's in for it now. I was wondering how soon his bad advise would backfire on him. Poor Kurama, it seems he's the victim of bad timing. First Yusuke and his mother, then Hiei and Kagome and now, now Kuwabara. I'll bet the next chapter is gonna be a hoot. I'll have to remember my popcorn and Jerry Springer doll. update soon, I love it!
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahahahahaha Ahahahah! stupid fox! I wanna know who's gonna kill him first. Hiei or Kags? What an idiot!
person Ryukotsusei
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. You do know that Hiei is going to kill Youko when he finds out just how much of the advice he gave was utter nonsense right? Poor Hiei, he's in for it now. Kagome is going to strangle him the first time he tries to put any of it to use lol I can almost feel sorry for my firefly. Good chapter, update soon please
person ffad
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please write more its good
person Diane
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, the last chapter was a hoot. It will be interesting to see how the girls react to it. Will also be interesting to find out whose reincarnations the babies are.
person badkitty
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow Youko is a regular Dr.Phil. Yeah, that's right Youko no means yes and yes all woman are happiest when they are pregnant. Now all the guys have to do is try out the advice on Kagome and Yukina and see how many hand prints end up on their faces. Then we have Hiei, wow what a smooth talker. Asking for sex and using big and ugly in the same sentence is a sure bet not to get laid. Men.
person Ryukotsusei
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Youko's threats, that would be extremely humiliating.... Which is fitting lol I get the feeling Youko doesn't much care for Hiei lol Then again i think the feeling is mutual. Good chapter, update soon please