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ch71
Sesshoumaru, you idiot! How could he let he rage blind him to let Naraku hurt him like that?

But what's this, Inuyasha is back awake now and he's gone all crimson in the eyes too. Naraku, better have a good life insurance plan and that it's all paid up because Inuyasha just seen his mate wounded by Naraku no less and his youkai is not pleased, at all.

What is InuTaisho doing? Is he just standing around watching the scene unfold? And where is the pup? Don't keep me waiting on the bit of infor. I want to know that she's alright.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~

Just started reading, so I'm sorry if this has been corrected already. But you did ask for corrections, so...
1) It's "hakama", not "hakamas". Japanese doesn't use plurals.
2) It's "daiyoukai" and not "taiyoukai".

Now that I've gotten that out of the way... This seems like a very interesting idea for a story, both because the story itself is interesting and, because, well... It's Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru! \^o^/

Hmm, I never really expected their father to act like that. From what little we've seen of him, I kind of had a different impression of him. But it was still a great chapter - I like it when an author lets you see how the characters are feeling, and I also like how you explained the logic behind his decision.

Well, it's interesting to see Myouga in the story. He's always funny. :)
I feel bad for Inuyasha... imagine having something like that happen.

Well, it seems like things are definitely getting interesting... O.O
I wish I could tell you if I thought Sesshoumaru was in character in this chapter, but I'm not sure what I think he'd do if this actually happened.

ch70
Oh, damn! InuTaisho stopped Sesshoumaru...What the hell is he thinking?

Love the way how you described Sesshoumaru's logical thinking on ruling out what was prey and what wasn't. Awesome!

Excellent work! Okay, I'm down to one last chapter and I'll be caught up to speed.

Nemesis ^_~

im glad that i decided to visit this site..otherwise i wouldnt have known that you'd updated..so quickly!! wow, keep up the fast updates and i might even forgive your for your cliffies..hehe..
this chapter was realy well writen..much better than the last one.. i dont know if anyone has told you this, but your action scenes have a sort of etherreal quality to them, you know..kind of like slow motion.. i love that sort of thing..
poor sesshomaru..i really think that he's going through a rough time..ofcourse so is inuyasha..but now im tending to feel more bad for the elder brother..
so inuyasha turns too? hehe..this is getting more interesting by the second!
looking forward to your next update :)

ch57
Okay, that was just plain cruel. I hope that Inuyasha will be alright. What will Sesshoumaru do now that his mate and pup is gone?

I'm back. I apologize for not being around, but I've have some projects going. Unfortunately, my mobile doesn't use text style, I can't read it that way. But anyway, Excellent work as always. I'm off for the next chapter.

Nemesis ^_~

ch58
I'd say let Sesshoumaru tear up the country side looking for his mate and kill that bastard, Naraku in the process. Serves that jerk right for taking something that doesn't belong to him. Who does he think his is, huh?

Oh, hope that Sesshoumaru finds him alright!

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Later....

Nemesis ^_~

ch59

That was soo not cool.

Nemesis ^_~