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I can't believe this! Will Sess hate Inu now for what happened to dad?? God, I hope not! Am enjoying ur story so far, but I really hope u kill off Naraku soon!

OY!!! you didnt just kill inu taisho did you?!!! NOOO!! omg..and inuyasha killed him? poor things..well, now that inuyashas turned, i hope naraku gets what he deserves...ive always wanted that..i mean in the anime, he just get away with everything and frankly i dont have the patience to read all the inuyasha manga to find out whether naraku dies in the end..
anwyay, nice chapter, it was writen well.. update soon~

You're right, I'm going to kill you!

No I won't but you better make up for that, because if you don't, I'll probably will!

....O.O OMG!!! well, i guess it was expected that he'd die eventually, since he was getting in their way of killing Naraku....i wonder if he ever thought that inuyasha might know where his own daughter was? oh well, i just hope you manage to kill Naraku off, cause though Kagome might be my least fav character, Naraku's my second. i think you're doing a good job with this story and i look forward to more chapters soon ^_^

Chapter 7

I know this has probably been said already (^^;;), but... It is actually spelled "Kouga". In Japanese, the "u" can sometimes make an "o" sound longer, and stand for another meaning - so "Koga" wouldn't be the right spelling. And the "ga" part does mean fang, although you'd pronounce it as "kiba" if it was just a word by itself. One more thing- Rin's name is written in hiragana (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hiragana), so we don't really know its exact meaning. I doubt that it means "cold" though.
I hope I don't sound like a know-it-all...

Wow, I'm surprised that Rin has anything to do with Naraku! I really hate Naraku, but I like Rin. And, I wonder what Kagura was thinking... I think I can guess.

Wow... O.O There were parts of that chapter where I wished I was in Inuyasha's place... XD
But I do feel bad for him, though. And was that wolf demon supposed to be Kouga?

I forgot to add this in an earlier review: So, Naraku's sisters?! I'm curious about this.
(I really, really hate Naraku.)

Jineji as a human... I don't know if I want to know...
And yes, yasha does mean some type of female demon, but that's not what Rumiko Takahashi meant when she came up with Inuyasha's name. I'm pretty sure that whatever a "yasha" is, it lives in a forest of some kind. Does that make sense? Inuyasha's forest...

Your alternate explanation for Naraku's existence is pretty interesting. I wonder what the middle sister will be like. She seems less evil than the others.
Kagura is SO DEAD if she tries anything with Sesshoumaru.

Also, I'm sorry for leaving so many reviews when these chapters were out a long time ago. ^-^;; I just wanted you to know that I'm reading and appreciating your story. Please tell me if I'm being annoying.

I haven't gotten up to chapter 72 yet, but I read your response to my reviews. Yes, I'm sure it's "dai". In a book I have that's written by Rumiko Takahashi* (it's only in Japanese), that's the way she writes it.

*Tell me if you want to know more about the book. It was a little hard to find- I got it from a Japanese bookstore in NYC. I think I might have gotten the only copy in the store.

And, in case you're wondering about my name - I don't have an account (because I'm horrible at writing fanfics). I'm also not very creative with usernames.

How could you have Inuyasha kill his dad (at least I'm assuming it was his dad? Not only that, but to make it so easy? That's a bit of a shameful death for an all-powerful taiyoukai

you are so right.....you're gonna get your butt kicked! luved the chapter though :). wwwwwwhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyy why did he have to die, i mean come on......inu taisho....damn. well i hope you at least will consider having him resurrected say by the ...tensaiga....perhasp. ok i give. you are the queen of evil genius right now so hurry up make the next chapter so i can stop crying. ok so ciao