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person Jonatan (Lill's little boyfiend)
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To Lill, My beloved Girlfrend: You just hurt my feelings...Hmmm....AH! I get it! You're just playing feisty, ne?
I luve it when girls play Hard-to-get! *Gives you a BIG WET kiss*
person Lill
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To Jonatan: Feisty? Just playing 'Hard-to-get'?! Like in: Just pretending not to like you?
WHAT ARE YOU!? A FREAK!??? I said it once and I say it again: I HATE YOU!
*Kicks you inbetween your legs and starts laughing when you scream in pain*
That was for the kiss! You son of a Bitch! XP

To you: Heh...MELIKE! ^_^ Update soon! Please? *Makes puppy eyes*
person Jonatan (Lill's little boyfiend)
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You sure can kick like a hors! A Feisty horse...*Grins*
person Ann
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Lill! I know how you can get rid of him: Tell him that if he stops bugging you and all that, than you'll give him a BIG kiss!
Or if he is still bugging you, than say you'll sleep with him if he stops bugging you and all that.

P.S. This story is great! Update soon plz! X)
person Jonatan (Lill's little boyfiend)
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OO! Thats a good advice! A kiss wont help! Lill you should take her advice and go to bed with me!
We're both of legal age you know! *Undresses you in my mind*
person Lill
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To Jonatan, that lousy son of a Bitch: WHAT!? Sleep with...YOU??!! No way! I'll rather have you bugging me! And stop undressing me in your stupid mind!
It's embaressing...Can't we talk about this? I'm sure no body likes having us arguing with eachother here!

Anyway: Great story! Sorry if we're buggin' you alot! It's his fault! NOT MINE!

Heh....MELIKE! ^_^

And now I'm going to think evil thoughts about a certain son of a Bitch.
Jonatan? Would you mind coming for a visit so that I can GIVE YOU THE WORST AND MOST PAINFUL DEATH EVER!!!!!!!??!
person Jonatan (Lill's little boyfiend)
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heheheh...Would you bear my child?
person inuchanpuppy
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Sesshy *grin*. can't control himself.

Anyway from what I've read so far, everything is just great. Especially Inuasha character, and I loved the interaction between Myouga and IY. Very funny. Keep up the good work. ^_______^
person Lill
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
X_x! You got that one from Miroku, didn't you? Hmpfh! When I'm finished with you, YOU WON'T BE ABLE TO HAVE ANY!

GRRRRRRR....DIE, YOU BAKA!!!!!!!!!

Ummm...This story is, as always, one of the best stories I have ever read! Great! Update!


Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
person PeaceMaker
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow you two! Be friends!


Anyway: I adore your story. It's wonderfull!

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-PeaceMaker