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person Lill
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To Jonatan: No! I don't want to go out with you!
I wouldn't sleep with you even for a million horses! Hmm...Wait...I love horses, and my other two could need the company...
Hmm...No! I hate you too much!
And I don't want you massaging...Wait...A massage seems very tempting...Hmmm...NO!
And I would never want to take a bath in your house!
GOT THAT!? Now go to Hell!!!


Ahem...Update as soon as you can please! I can't wait until the next chapter!

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
person susanne
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To lill : Try calling tha police guys!! That should do it!!!


To the author: Anyway great ficcy!
person Lill
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To Susanne: Hmm...Maybe calling the police wouldn't be so bad! Ok! I'll try!
No, wait...Then they would probably be very mean toward Jonatan...
Why did I have get born with emotions like guilt? Grrrr....
I think I know why Sesshy's always so emotionless! *Sigh*


Well...At least reading this story all over again will probably make me feel happier!
Cause I just absolutely LOVE this fic!

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
person Jonatan (Lill's little boyfiend)
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To Lill, My Luv muffin: I knew you loved me! Hmmm...maybe if I talked dirty to you, than you wouldn't mind if I slept with you!
Come on over to my house, bitch! That's right! Youre my little luv bitch! Better? :D
person Lill
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To Jonatan: That's it I'm calling the police!


To the Great Author of this Wonderful fic: It's still as fantastic as ever!

MELIKE! ^_^
person Lill
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just borrowed Lills computer whil she's on de phone. She said she had somethin to tell somebody or somethin...
Poor Lill...Jonata is really buggin her out! I wish I was the one to be admired that much! I WOULDN MIND!!!
By the way: my name is Chrisstina!

mmmm...Nice fic! I liket it! Its very great!
Heh... Can you updat as soon as possible? I would realy like to se what happens!! =)

lol!

-Chrisstina! =)
person dah
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I actually like this one here. :P Your writing style is quite good. Enough details but not too much. Your charas work quite well too, and I totally adore the way you have made sess to be confused. :D And Inu, well, lol, he is as he is. About sess: maybe you could be him a bit colder person? So you could archieve more of the original chara? Anyhow, good story, and I will definitely continue reading this. I hope that Lord Narakus two sisters ain't Kikyo and Kagome.. because that would be horrible. :P
person tenohikari
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I love possessive-semi-Sesshomaru, can't wait for more!
person Princess Sin
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this was excellent. you have both inuyasha and sesshomaru personalities
down to the letter. you're doing a wonderful job. update soon, i want to see what
'Lord Naraku's' sisters and the evil demon have instore for the dog brothers.
person uzamaki liliana
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMg thatx sooo much for updating this fast I love your writing style and you r like apsolutly grate and thax for emailing me
I love you soo much for updating early you sooo rock