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person Lill
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As always you're amazing! LOL!
But I don't have to change my Id or whatever. Because the police took Jonatan!
He's not allowed to spy, stalk, flirt, touch, talk, chat, not even look at me, Without my permission!
And there's no way in Hell that I'll ever talk to him again! Ok...Maybe when I'm starting to feel guilty...
Which will happen someday in a hundred years! Or maybe a just a few months...
HAH! Revenge is sweeeeeeeeeeeeet.....
Heh...Someone told me he started to cry! HAHAhahaha...ha...heh...ha...errrr....I'm starting to feel guitly...

Anyway: As always there's no need to tell you that you are one of the most amazing writers, with one of the most amazing stories ever!
I LOVE IT! LOL! IT'S AMAZING! WONDERFUL! FANTASTIC! GREAT! And a lot more!

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
person Anonymos
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gooooooooooooooood!
person Taicrazy
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful as always! you really are one of the best authors I have ever seen! :)
person Taicrazy
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's actualy very hard to believe that you once were a 'bad' author!
you're wonderful! I couldn't find more than one spelling!
you truly have good rights to be proud of yourself! :)

update soon! :D

heh...are boy's who like reading lemons and yaoi, gay?
umm...I'm a boy...above 19 years old and I kinda like yaoi and lemons.
but...since I have a crush on a certain girl then...hmm...I'm confused.
by the way: I live nearby that certain girl,
she is nice, pretty, can get quite angry if a boy look at her too much (five seconds maximum), and she used to be stalked! *hint, hint*
guess who it is? if you find out, then don't tell her! DON'T tell her!

ahem...as always: an amazingly good chapter! :D
you ARE one of the best authors I have ever seen! either you like it or not!
person Lill
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To Taicrazy: If 'that certain' girl is who I think it is, then you're in trouble!
Unless it's someone else, then I wish you good luck! :)
Just don't stalk her! Give her poetry! Alot of girls like poetry!
By the way: If it's Tanja or Ann, then give her roses along with the poetry!!
They like romantic things you know...;)


Anyway: I've finally found a word (or two) which suits this story: Heavenly! And WOW!

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^

person Polka dot
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah Naraku arrives, well sorta, he's always fun to have around.
person Taicrazy
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
umm...Lill? errrrrr....

Roses are red,
violets are blue,
you are cute,
and do you love me too?

just asking! don't hate me, OK?

ahem...as always: wonderful story! :)
person Lill
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To Taicrazy: O_O You're just kidding, right? Right?
Heh...I....ummm...That was sweet! I...um....*Gives you a kiss on the cheek*
I don't hate you! Hmm...But....Are you sure you ain't in love with either Tanja or Ann?
Cause....Well...They....Umm....See ya!





Heh....MELIKE! ^_^ Update soon!
person Taicrazy
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lill...are you saying that Tanja and Ann are in love with me?
well...then I'm afraid their feelings are going to get hurt...
umm...so...about that...are you saying that you like me, or not?
just curious!


ahem....wonderful story! :)
person Lill
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To Taicrazy: ^_^; Heh...I'm not saying that I don't like you!
I...ummm....I....Well....You're nice, cute, smart, you don't stalk people...
Umm....I'm sure there's alot of girls out there just waiting for you to step into their lives!
So...Ummm...Maybe we can talk about this via the phone? I feel kinda uncomfortabel about writing this down here where everybody can read it!

Heh...Anyway: A Heavenly story! Wow!

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^