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by Avarwen

person SP777
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am FINALLY reviewing this story after reading it silently.

Normally I'm not a reader of yaoi [how does one pronounce that?] but I've read too many good ones, stories that HAVE a plot & humor is nice also, to discredit it...and I've got to say I've seen a few authors who take the time to ACTUALLY put together a decent plot and try to give the characters some believability to NOT cheat their readers.

You're one of the few authors I'm now starting to like, you actually take time to 'flesh' out a story and give us something worth our time to read and believe me I don't give out a lot of 'praises' except to the Almighty & folks who deserve it. Besides I can't imagine a writer who takes the time to even DO a story wanting to do ANYTHING half-ass, I mean why attempt to write in the first place if you're not going to give it your best?

Anyway, nuff' said...and back to silent reading.
person Rawben
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! great chapter! i hope sess keeps a close eye on yasha!!
person Lill
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There's no need to tell you how much I love it!
IT'S HEAVENLY INCREDIBLE!!!!!! WOW!!!

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
person PolkaDot
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, the plot thickens, you see Naraku is fun.
person uzamaki liliana
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what an interesting chapter I was wondering if you are going to pair rin and kaugra up?? I thpught this becouse of that coment rin made about not wanting naraku to hurt kaugra?? well thax for updating and I'm looking forward to the next chapie
person Chibi-Porunga
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo! Very interesting things going on! O.O!! Poor Inuyasha...always getting himself in Death's way. Yeah, I know what ya mean - I get lazy and decide to not go back and fix mine either ^.~
person Lill
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best lemons/limes that I have EVER read!
I loved it!

MELIKE! ^_^
person littlebit
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is wonderfully written and has me on the edge of my seat wanting to know what will happen next.
It must be tiring to be such a good writer. I greedily await your next update but understand your need for rest. Good art takes time.
~Littlebit
person Polka dot
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh those vampiric dogs, so sweet, ya gotta love the lemon
person anonymous
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beautiful. loved it.