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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10. Your rants are always amusing (and very true). I personally believe that Christmas has absolutely nothing to do with Christ anymore (despite the name's origin) and should therefore not be offensive to anyone. In all honesty, why the hell can't I say "Merry Christmas"? And if anyone feels that Christmas is still about religion, then please tell me - how is me receiving a Xbox360 and Kingdom Hearts 2 (I HOPE!) a celebration of Christ's birth? Face it: most people from age 1 to age 25 think of Christmas as a time to get stuff, *I* have never seen a 6 year old say "Mommy! Christ was born today right?! I want to pray to him!" or a 26 year old say "Ah, yes, Christ was born today" as opposed to "AWESOME! I GOT A NEW GAME!" or "Oh... more clothes... again... Thanks ma..." *Looks at what was written, blinks* But, THAT is not why I'm writing (typing) this review lmao (totally sidetracked again)
To the actual review: Now, that was sex that I can honestly say, I didn't cringe while reading. The whole time I just sat there trying my damndest not to have a heartattack (I'm pretty sure my pulse skyrocketed during that scene) and also trying to not have a meltdown in the process. I almost failed. My God was that hot. Sesshomaru sucking- durrrr *brain short-circuits* Bah, most of the time (for some particular reason) written bj scenes never actually capture my attention (I mostly just skim over 'em, to be honest), but holy fuck! I never thought Inuyasha (or Sesshomaru) could be so HOT doing that. I LOVE DEBAUCHED INUYASHA! *beams ecstatically* And the way you had Inuyasha ready to kick ass when Sesshomaru bit him - you are amazing. I will most likely forever love your writing from just how you manage to keep Inuyasha in character, even in moments like those. Awesome job!
To the actual review: Now, that was sex that I can honestly say, I didn't cringe while reading. The whole time I just sat there trying my damndest not to have a heartattack (I'm pretty sure my pulse skyrocketed during that scene) and also trying to not have a meltdown in the process. I almost failed. My God was that hot. Sesshomaru sucking- durrrr *brain short-circuits* Bah, most of the time (for some particular reason) written bj scenes never actually capture my attention (I mostly just skim over 'em, to be honest), but holy fuck! I never thought Inuyasha (or Sesshomaru) could be so HOT doing that. I LOVE DEBAUCHED INUYASHA! *beams ecstatically* And the way you had Inuyasha ready to kick ass when Sesshomaru bit him - you are amazing. I will most likely forever love your writing from just how you manage to keep Inuyasha in character, even in moments like those. Awesome job!
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
go rin go!
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was absolutely amazing. I just read through all twelve chapters of your story today and I am thrilled that I decided to take a peak into this story. ^_^ I am more than a little impressed by your writing skills, it makes me wish I could write like that.....but then again, I wouldn't expect to have anywhere near such quality as you have built up into your story. I look foreward to the thirteenth chapter and until then, I suppose this is Good Bye. ^_^
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I loved the story! I hope you update soon, because this fanfic amuses me beyond belief!! I don't know why, it just does. And your rants are interesting.
Yes, I read every word of your rants.
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Don't mind me. I like to rant a lot too.
See, I'm doing it now.
*slaps self* Naughty Sandy! Naughty!!
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Yes, I read every word of your rants.
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Don't mind me. I like to rant a lot too.
See, I'm doing it now.
*slaps self* Naughty Sandy! Naughty!!
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I like Rin and totally loved the fight! Go Inuyasha!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome job there. Please, update soon and Merry Christmas!
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT AND THAX SOOO MUCH FOR UPDATING SO FAST AND MARRY CHRISTMAS ( or whatever you celebrate)
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter! i hope sessy makes it in time, and that inu and sess make-up! Mabye they need marrige councling, lol!
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, I think this chapter was your best written yet ^.^ Yeah, I agree...damn people trying to rewrite your stuff; bah! *shakes a fistin fury then gets distracted by a penny* Ooo..shiny! Once again, excellent chapter and I looked forward to the next ^.^
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More of a comment than review..
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Yeah, it was a compliment. Sorry if it didn't come out clear, I do have a tendency to ramble. :-)
Plus, sorry if what I said came out harsh, I also have a tendency to be TOO blunt & out-spoken, so it sounds either harsh or rude. One of the things I DON'T like about being on-line because it's hard for me to let folks know I'm just giving a straight forward answer, especially when you're talking to folks for the first time, no harm intended.
..and yeah, I wasn't trying to put down 'first-time' writers, I'm just saying in GENERAL. Because, in all fairness, I've seen first-timers put out good storylines & plots and then you have first-time writers who get it by the 3rd or 4th story. So, I wanna be clear I was not putting any First-time writers down, if they happen to read these reviews.
..and these folks are not necessarily on AFF.net, I'm talking other fanfiction sites.
Hey I've been around longer than you ...7 years. :-) Have you done anything I may have seen, possibly on FF.net?
bye for now...
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Yeah, it was a compliment. Sorry if it didn't come out clear, I do have a tendency to ramble. :-)
Plus, sorry if what I said came out harsh, I also have a tendency to be TOO blunt & out-spoken, so it sounds either harsh or rude. One of the things I DON'T like about being on-line because it's hard for me to let folks know I'm just giving a straight forward answer, especially when you're talking to folks for the first time, no harm intended.
..and yeah, I wasn't trying to put down 'first-time' writers, I'm just saying in GENERAL. Because, in all fairness, I've seen first-timers put out good storylines & plots and then you have first-time writers who get it by the 3rd or 4th story. So, I wanna be clear I was not putting any First-time writers down, if they happen to read these reviews.
..and these folks are not necessarily on AFF.net, I'm talking other fanfiction sites.
Hey I've been around longer than you ...7 years. :-) Have you done anything I may have seen, possibly on FF.net?
bye for now...
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know I love it! Heh...Who wouldn't?
Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
Heh...MELIKE! ^_^