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GAH SESHOMARU GET THERE GET THERE FAST OMG POOR YASH update for all that is same in this world please don't lat that pig (naraku) rape yasha please please

You really know how to keep us on the edge of our seats, don't you? I was......angry that it ended like that.....not because it was bad or anything, I just wanted to see what was going to happen next. Anyway, keep up the excellent work and I'll see you/review again in chapter....fourteen if I remember correctly......Well, until then, bye. ^_^

I've got to know: Where you at Fanfiction.Net? If so what happened? I was looking for this fic there and couldn't find it.

Nemesis

Chapter 11. Naraku means hell? Wow, the perfect name for him I guess (I love Naki-sama {and I love to butcher his name also lmao}). I know Kagura means something akin to 'music' and Kanna means 'godless', (Rin [depending on the kanji] can mean anything from fish scales to zero, or to be specific: it can mean diamonds, companion, cold, forest, ring, bell, etc.); but I've never thought to look for Naraku's meaning - I always figured it was a synonym for Onigumo (meaning spider demon - or literally, demon spider). Something I found amusing: kumo can also mean cloud, so if someone didn't like nigori, Naraku would easily become 'Hell made from a/the cloud demon' or 'Cloud Demon's Hell'... So. Weird. I'm not even going to get started on the chaos that comes with Sesshomaru's name... but, if you ever figure out the real meaning, I'd love to know it lol Oh, and I remember you posed a question a while back: Izayoi means the 16th moon, lit. 'the moon climbs pausing', I believe that's the moon where its mostly full, but is missing a sliver off the side (when its waning, obviously)... Speaking of moons, are there going to be any new moons in the story? *wink, wink, nudge*

Chapter 12. You know, I've just realized that I have no sure way of ever figuring out how to pronounce 'yaoi'. I mean, sticking to Japanese regular pronounciations: yaoi would be ya-o-i (ya Oh E); but it could possibly be a Chinese/Japanese blur of pronounciation: yao-i (yow E). No matter how many people I ask (and you're right - people don't exactly look at you nicely when you ask them that question, but I think it's more because they have no idea what the hell I am talking about rather than what I am actually saying), no one's ever been able to answer me. I just say, 'ya-oi' (sounds more like 'yow Oh E' though when I do it lol), I am totally going on the assumption that it's like 'Kaori' (Cow ri) though. *blinks* I've JUST realized that I have way too much fucking time on my hands.

Again, to the actual review ('Sidetracked' is my middle name! Haw-chaw!): Is it bad that I knew exactly when Kouga and Inuyasha started talking right from the anime? lol As soon as I saw "mutt-face" I backtracked, blinked, then laughed (in that order). It makes me nostalgic whenever I see Inuyasha and Kouga arguing, I love their "We hate each other's guts, but we don't really want each other dead" (except for that one time) attitude. In fact, some of the best scenes are those where Kouga and Inuyasha bicker (and whenever Sesshomaru speaks in his 'affronted' manner. You know the one, "You dare think you are worthy of this Sesshomaru? How laughable!" Ah, especially when Sesshomaru was going after Totousai, now that was a scene to remember). But, ah, less talk of the anime, more talk of the story: WTF?! I couldn't help reading that chapter's ending and thinking - WTF?! It's like, what happened to the love? Inuyasha is moody (scare~ee) and Sesshomaru is bossing him around (as usual), but this time Inuyasha completely loses it. Again, where is the LOVE?! And why exactly IS Inuyasha so pissed? I connected with him on some points, but all his frustration totally lost me on others, is he that upset with how quickly things have changed between himself and Sesshomaru; or is it more like their mating has posed a link between their minds and some of Inuyasha's frustration is really Sesshomaru's (because undoubtedly he's frustrated as well)? Amazingly, I am starting to dislike Naraku in this fic (and me being an "I LOVE THE BAD GUYS!" type of person, this is very new for me) and hope that something stops him from killing Inuyasha (or Someone.) All in all, I am becoming more than addicted to this story - you are a chapter machine! lol Merry Christmas (It is now 12:45 AM, December 25th, so yeah Merry Christmas!)

WHY DID YOU STOP THERE?! I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!
I WANNA SEE NARAKU FUCK THE HELL OUTTA INUYASHA!!!

I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! But...Why did you have to stop before the 'fun' part?
*Sigh* Well...It was as heavenly as always!

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^

Oh, man! The suspense! Will Sesshoumaru be able to save him? Will he be too late? And if he is, will he hate Inuyasha? Aaaach! You can't leave us hanging like this! I'm sure that you so enjoy doing that though, leaving us hanging by our fingernails. Devious little author.

Well written. Can't wait for the next installment!

Merry Christmas!

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

Nooo! Poor Inuyasha!! >.> Eventhough Naraku is kinda hot....but, what about Sesshie!?!?

Well, it's time to get off my lazy ass and actually review again (bah, I'm real bad with commitment). And since this is going to be long, I'm splitting up my reviews. There are going to be 4 LONG ones.

Chapter 8. *dumbfounded* That chapter will be forever etched into my psyche. Lil' ole innocent me (*roaring laughter from best friend who is sitting right next to me*) had just been happily reading that delightfully intriguing chapter and *WHAM* sex with words! Now, to put that sensefully: I was reading and then that whole scene with Inuyasha begging Sesshomaru happened and even though I had been fully aware that, yes, they were doing an awful lot of panting and moaning - the idea never really hit me until I read: ‘Do you feel that? Do you feel me?’. I think I got a nosebleed at that precise moment because the image of Sesshomaru pressed up against Inuyasha and SAYING THAT (even though I have heard much more naughty things) totally blew my mind. I thought of that scene throughout my entire Final that day. Fucking HIGHLY DISTRACTING. Oh, and for your glossary: onegai shimasu is more 'I beg of you!' and onegai is please... *Imagines Inuyasha panting THAT and spasms* (Don't ask me why, but whenever someone says 'Onegai shimasu!' to me, they always sound out of breath - and naturally I link that to sex. *sigh* I am such a pervert.)

Chapter 9. Flushing, confused, tender Sesshomaru... *giggle* I so loved that. Assertive Inuyasha (holy shit at the reverse of roles there!) Note: does Leiko mean arrogant? When Inuyasha called Sesshomaru 'arrogant', I thought of the word Leiko (this is more of a girls name than an actual word in Japanese) and I've heard that it meant arrogant, but I have no idea. *I* know of no Japanese 'L' words (considering how L is hard to pronounce), but maybe I missed one? Er, was just wondering if you knew (totally went off topic there).