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person Lill
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for inuyasha...
*Sigh* Again there's no need for me to tell you how much I LOVE this fic!
Cause you know I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok...Now a bad face! Umm.... :p Good enough? Hmm...Maybe not...AHA! *Grins evilly at the thought of what Sesshy will do to Kuku*
Heh...Kuku is the nickname I gave to Naraku! Heh...Cute, ne?

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
person Naraku's mistress who ties him to the bed and rides him till he bleeds...
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Inuyasha! Poor Inuyasha!
Bad Naraku! Bad Naraku! Come here so that I can spank your sexy yet lovely ass!!! *Spanks him*
*SIGH* This hurt me more than you....Hmm...Lill? Is it okey if I borrow your nick for Naraku? It's cute!!!
person Lill
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To Naraku's mistress who ties him to the bed and rides him till he bleeds: Sure!! A nickname is for everybody to use!! ^_^
By the way: You have a very long name!!!!!! Now go spank him!!!! And ride him till he bleeds! *Evil smirking going on on my face!*

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
person Naraku's mistress who ties him to the bed and rides him till he bleeds...
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^



*Ties Kuku to the bed and rides him till he bleeds, and begs me to stop! But actualy he just wanna be on top!* Cool, it rhymed!!!
Now back to my buisness! Oh yeah....
person Lemon crazy
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
person Chibi-Porunga
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Moo-ha! I fear her not, LoL. Aww, poor poor Inu: so mistreated and abused. But poor Sesshie too >.< I think it's interesting where you got theidea about th tears of blood ^.^ I remember on the Castlevania game on N64 there was a sequence when one of the statue's eyes poured blood...but then it turned into this monster thing if ya got too close O.o
person SaDiStIcxWh0r3
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you 100%. A yaoi story is nothing without some angst and horrible and devilish things going on. I guess that's why I love yaoi so much. *sighs blissfully* Well now this chapter had me thinking that our little hanyou toy is pregnant. *eyes glow* How splendid! Maybe the child or pup will die before its born and so much more horrible things happen. *eyes glow* ^_^ You can take this story in any direction right now and it's so interesting. O.o, another update today? Oh if you do save it for New Years when the time hits 12:00am the start of the New Year, have it be the first chapter you post, of well the New Year. ^_^ That would be kinda neat I guess. *shrugs* Do what you will though. Well that’s all for this annoying review. Later
person Deity
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Ok, I never got the chance to review number.....I think it was seventeen so here is what I had to say for that.
I really like that healer, she's cool. I'm not even going to attempt to spell her name, but I have a question, it is a women right? Because with her you keep say her and his, and him and she......it's confusing me......well, you didn't say all of that, but I might of just gotten confused and you were really talking about Sessoumaru or their dad....maybe evenKatashi, I dunno....^_^ Well, anyway, keep up the good work and stuff....^_^
And for chapter eighteen;
I liked this chapter too. Since the healer was acting that way....does that mean that Inuyasha's pregnant, or am I just going to have to wait and find out? I hope it's Sesshoumaru's though, that'd be a real bitch if it were Naraku's....I think I spelt that right. Anyway, keep up t he good work and I'll review again for chapter Nineteen. Until then, Bye! ^_^ (Sorry for any grammer/spelling mistakes)
person Anon
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh no ...:(
person Shini
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEHEHE sure Inu is pregnant. It must be Sessy´s . Just think how adorable and good looking the pups must be...sigh....
I like both chapter. Sessy finally realises how much he loves Inu. I think they both will have a rough time, but thats life...and Sessy kicks Narakus ass....I´m so damn sure...HEHE
AHH by the way....HAPPY NEW YEAR...It only can get better...:-)