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by Avarwen

person Rocky
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wanna know something... i just reviewed and it put me under anon's name... weird... that me up there not him... just so u don't get confused... oh forgot to mention... THOSE BETTER NOT BE NARAKU'S PUP'S OR I'LL HUNT U DOWN AND LET U BE TORN TO PEICES BY SESS AND INU!!!! MUAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.... just to clatify... let them be Sess's pups... please ::big puppy eyes::
person Crazy Fangirl 0098 Sesshy
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are sooooo goooooood!
person Naraku's mistress who ties him to the bed and rides him till he bleeds...
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For some reason I still feel sorry for Inuyasha....

Naraku? Come here! Bad boy! Bad boy! *Spank*

*Sigh* *Ties him to the bed and rides him till he bleeds and BEGS me to stop!*
Oh yeah....
person serenestorm
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love your fic. also like the names you came up with for the pups. you wanted help with names. one of my favs is shinsei.. seperatly"shin" has a lot of meanings but it can mean faith and "sei" also has a lot of meanings but it can mean spirit. together shinsei means divinity, pure, dignity. i used this name in a very old sailor moon fic of mine for my male character. yogen is another fav of mine, it means promise.
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, you're right but I guess you already knew that ^_~

Oh, and here I was thinking that you were going to make this a mpreg but I can live with the outcome. I felt bad for InuYasha's mom. She just didn't know how to handle the situation either way. Now, I have a feeling that Sesshoumaru will tell his mate the truth but how will that affect InuYasha? I'm crossing my fingers and praying that *something* good will come out of this.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~
person uzamaki liliana
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DON'T YOU DARE MAKE HIM PRAGNANT WITH NARAKU'S KIDS
please please please that would be so horible whaaaaaaaaaaaaaa T_T and as for the names I like them all accept Nanashi (it just dosen't seem like a name Yasha would use fir his kiddies
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO! A cliffie *sighs and falls over* I hink Inuyasha should be pregnant with half belonging to Sesshie and half belonging to Naraku ^.^ Yes, yes...I'm evil I know! I liked Inuo and Hikaru, but I thought Hikaru was a girl's name O.o Or, Midori could be an option, it means green <---close enough to a forest and flowers and stuffs. In a story I'm wirting concerning an OC and Sesshomaru, it took me forever to pick their son's name, but I finally settled on one ^.^ *plays with a yarn ball until next chapter*
person Anon
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The pups better be Sesshomaru's please!!
And I hope Sess does tell Inu the truth...
Poor Inu.

Great job!
person Deity
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you updated, this chapter was geat........I really, really think that he should be preganant by the way.......and just to put a small thought in, If theye were to be Nuraku's, not only would it take a strange twist in the plot, but some fans may not like it......but I'll love it in whichever way it deciedes to go. (They all sound very interesting to me) Anyway....some japanese names are;

Girls~
Leyu, Ryukoku, Himiko (I'm not sure if you had this one, or something close to it), and Tomiko.

Boys~
Ryoushin, Hiruka, Yoshi, Tooru, Shiro, Reano (This one's my favorite), Shiori, and Yuri or Yurii

I know that's more than five, (for the boys), but....I dunno. That's all I could really think of. ^_^ Anyway, that's all I have, Bye!
person Anya
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How about Kyoshi (key-o-she) and Miko (me-ko)?