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person Snowfall
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done! I love a warm and tender Sesshoumaru. Great chapter. I'm glad that Inuyasha voiced his fears and that Sesshoumaru did not reject him. Whew!

Snowfall
person Naraku's mistress who ties him to the bed and rides him till he bleeds...
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would never get tired of my buisness! Erm...Wait...Business is how it's actually spelled, right?
Well anyway: I got tears in my eyes when I read the 23th chapter! It was so romantic...Yet I feel bad for Inuyasha....
Bad Naraku! Bad Naraku! No sex for at least a month!

Naraku- WHAT!? That's unfair! *Glares evil at me*

O.o Eheh....Erm....On second thought: Come here ya damn evil sexy demon!
*Ties Naraku to the bed and rides him till he bleeds*








person Devious Lil Devil
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like these names: Inuko: boy, Tsukiko, Aki: boy, Naomi, Satoshi, Moriko. 3 girls and 3 boys. 3 names ending with -i and 3 names ending with -ko. ^__^
person Ryuko
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^__^ Hihi. Let me start off by saying that I love this story. And that I will love it just that much more if you make it mpreg, because mpreg rocks, and that is that.
Next: Names. Finding a good name for just about anything, to me, is hard, so more power to you if you can actually pull the pup's names off. I've seen some pretty iffy ones for Inu/Sess pups so...(Stuff like Dijushi...o.0).
As for Gin, it definitely means silver, and I honestly think it'd be more likely to be a boy's name than a girl.
Inuko-...Yes, it does mean dog-child. Kindof. But the proper way of putting it is Koinu, which is literally puppy. In fact, take most animal's names in Japanese and add a ko to the front and it means the baby of whatever that animal happens to be (koneko-kitten, kohitsuji-lamb, etc). However, it would be a girl's name, not a boy's, for the very same reason that just about every name on your list like it, including Akiko, is a girl's name: Japanese names that end with ko are girl's names. That's just a general thing. Just like how names that end with shi are usually boy's names.
Kyo: In case the person who suggested it didn't mention this, this is usually a boy name. Just thought you should know. Oh, same goes for Keitaro and Satoshi.
Tooru: Although, yes, this is usually a boy's name, it could also be a girl's name.
Shiori: I have only ever seen this name a girl's name. If your sources tell you it could be a boy's name, far be it from me to correct, but it is a girl's name as well.
Shiro: XD I think this is a cute name for the dog brothers' pups because, though it's a common boy's name, I've also seen it as a common name for dogs. Works either way, ne?
Some of the other suggested names, like Ryukoku, Shinsei, and Yogen, sound rather odd and formal if you ask me. *shrug* But it's your decision, so...
Anywho, may I suggest: Kiyoshi (boy, as an alternative to Kyoshi), Kiyoko (means pure, girl), Yuiko (girl), Takara (means treasure, either), Haruko (means spring, girl), Atsuko (girl), Ryoki(boy), Ryoko(girl), Ryuko(means dragon, girl, :3), Ryuji(see Ryuko, boy), Hatsumi (girl), Azusa(boy), Shinogu (or Shinobu, boy)...and now I'm looking through my manga for names, and that's a bad thing, so I'll stop here. Anywho, hope at least some of that helped. Good luck with the names, and keep up the good work on the story, even if you have to take a little longer to get it written. ^___^
person Jess
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Satiku! The child needs to be named Satiku!!! Oh yeah, I LOVE your story! It's so great!
person Snowfall
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! That chapter said 'End' at the bottom! Whadja mean by that!? I hope it was just an accident, ne? *chuckle*

Snowfall
person inufangirl007
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter! it was very sweet! Inuko is my friends screenname! she drew her own inuyasha character for it too! please update soon!
person uzamaki liliana
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WELL IF THE CHILDREN ARE NARAKUS I WIIL CRY AND BE MAD AND AND I WILL NEVR TALK TO YOU AGAIN YOU CAN'T YOU CAN'T DO THAT TO MU CUT ELITTLE INCEONT YASHA NOPE NO NO NO NO NO NO NO THE KITS ARE INOCEN'T AND IF THEY ARE NARAKUS THE WILL BE TAINTED AND PLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEESE PLEASE DON'T MAKE THEM HIS KIDDIES
SAD::( SAD:( SAD :(
oh and on a happer note thanx a lat for updating and Iloved this chapter
person ArchNemesis
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had a hard time sitting through it. It was very heart wrenching. I almost cried. It seems that Sesshoumaru has succeded in the first part of InuYasha's recovery. I hope that everything else will turn out well for the both of them.

As for the names I like Katana. It reminds of Princess Katana from Mortal Combat.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~
person Anon
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
once again another great ch.!!!! keep up the good work... saw the little thingy at the top and i just got off the phone with my cuzin and she said it would be okay... as long u said it belonged to someone else and not to use it for as ur own... but i told her about ur story (and she knows i'm real picking when it comes to reading them and actually reviewing... and was inmpressed and is going to check it out!!) so go ahead and use it if u want to... i've got more names for u

Einujieru (boy)- Flourishing To Sew Time Graceful Flow (long but it makes since)

Kurisu (boy)- Revered Air Reason

Jizasu (boy)- Revered Time Sitting

Jyaku (boy)- Air person

Bureiku (boy)- Air Dancing Soul

Buraian (boy)- Safe Thunder Dancer

Raian (boy)- Safe Thunder

Riku (boy)- Air Reason

Aron (boy)- Wild Theory

Arekusu (boy)- Revered Wild Air Spirit (long but beautiful... this is my boyfriend nik name that i gave him)

Jyurio (boy)- Confusious Reasoning King

Biri (both)- Beautiful Reason

Merisa (girl)- Eye Enticing Reason

Sera (girl)- roughly Inclusive Avert

Jyaeshika (girl)- Graceful Flower Scholar Person

Eipuriru (girl)- Flourishing Flowing Wind Reason (don't lik ta name... but i luv the meaning)

Jyunu (girl)- Confucious To Sew

Jiru (girl)- Flowing Time

Saimon (boy)- Will Enticing Question

Shion (boy)- Graceful Scholar

Kasurin (girl)- Revered Moral Flower

Makusu (boy)- Revered True Air

Kurisuten (girl)- Reason Heaven Revered Air

um... i'm gonna stop myself now... before i get too carried away... if u need any more... or mayb and english name translated into japanese...ask me... i can do it... um... well keep up the good work... tell me if u like any of the names... okay it's late i'm gonna go to bed!! night! keep up the good work hope to see a review soon ^_^

Rocky