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by Avarwen

person Rocky
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! again again again again again again again and a again this is another wonderful super-duper beautiful great ch.... ::sigh:: i'v wish i could write lik that... or at least draw peoples attention lik that... or lik u do... but i can't do that... well yeah her name is ment for a girl but that's kool that u took a good gess at it... and to clarify anything that u thought that i ment... i don't hate naraku... if u read my profile i wrote that naraku was hot... but if he brushed his hair he would look even better... i don't want to offened or put anyone out of the job or nothing but... i would ride him lik there was no tomorrow... if sess or inu weren't avalable first... -_^... hehe... but anyways... luv the ch. keep up the good work... cya next ch.!!

Rocky
person Snowfall
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An interesting chapter, although I really missed interaction with Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. Maybe Rin can redeem herself. I still say that the best girl name is Tsukiko because of Inuyasha's human nights and because of the crescent moon on Sesshoumaru's forehead. Actually, I think that it is also pretty.

Snowfall
person Naraku's mistress who ties him to the bed and rides him till he bleeds...
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor, poor Rin...She's such a sweet girl!

*Sigh* Another wonderful chapter!

But I feel so sorry for Rin...

Bad Naraku! *Spanks him...THEN ties him to the bed and rides him till he bleeds*
person Ryuko
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looked up some of the meanings for the meaningless names on your list. I honestly can't guarentee that these meanings are accurate, but I thought I'd at least try to help.

Kyo: large, approval, or ginger
Tomiko: child of wealth
Kiyoshi: means pure/purity (this one I'm pretty sure is right)
Yoshi:goodness, luck, free(can also supposedly be for a girl)
Shiro: fourth son (but as a color, white)
Yuri: Lily, (also can be for a girl, and I think this one is right too)
Keitaro: blessed
Shiori: Poem + weave (seriously doubt that one)
Yuiko: Bind + garment + child


person Wolf of Light
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon this is really great. Thanks
person insane vampire maru
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh your story is so good! i love it! i cant wait for the next chapter! keep on doing good ~.^
person serenestorm
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
shinsei is a boys name (sorry i didn't add that). i love inuko though, you have so got to use that one and hatoru has always been a fav of mine (love sailor moon:)
person Deity
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Great chapter.....About the names, I'm not really sure what they mean, but I can ask my friend, she should know, and if she doesn't I'll do some googling. Anyway, this chapter (as all the others) was amazingly written. And you ended it realy well. Anyway, keep up the good work and until chapter, uh....twenty four is posted, Bye! ^_^
person Polka dot
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yuki sounds like a wonderful name