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by Avarwen

schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonted to say I realy liked this story . I had stoped reading Inuyasha and came back to find this. I love a long fic and was suprised that I found a good fic this long and complet. So I look forward to the next from you. Thank you for sharing.
person Tiny
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love your story but you have to continue on!

p.s. its honybony51 ^^
person bellajayd
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi -- you need to put a warning up at the begining of the story stating that this fic contains a rape scene. It's not enough to only do so at the top of certain chapters. Rape is a very, very sensitive topic and some readers would rather avoid reading it. Please take this request seriously. Other than that, I like your writing style very much and hope you continue on with the story. The world needs more Inu/Sess! -Jayd
person SP777
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
about 74...

you know I never would have thought how feral Inuyasha could get if he remained in 'demon mode'. Because in the anime, they would NEVER show him cutting loose & doing real damage.

The episode when Inuyasha was cocooned w/Miroku & his demon side came to the forefront doesn't count, it seemed edited to me. Too bad the Inuyasha series wasn't created by people who aren't scared to show realism...and blood. It would have made Inuyasha more interesting to watch as time marched on.

Now Inuyasha is moving too slow, well it was...now the series is over for now.

But if they resume, if Ms. Takahashi EVER finish the manga, I hope they don't DRAG it on for the sake of making a profit, because I want to see the Sesshomaru/Rin 4-part arc done in anime form...and see the 2 brothers come to some type of resolution.

It WOULD have to happen, because Sesshomaru at this point in the manga series can't keep harping on Inuyasha about his human side & going on about who he travels with, especially when you get a glimpse of how he feels for Rin and continues to let her travel with him.

nuff said...
person MistressVamp
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SHIT! I've been crying the whole fucking time! I can't seem to stop! *sniff* Dear God...I think this is the best story I've ever read. And I've read over 9,000!
*blink*
*starts crying again*
person Shadow.Jinxs
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
74 chapterS! I read them all and feel so damn proud! It may had tooken me over a month to finish. well almost two months, but i finish it nevertheless! Many people thought I won't finish it! but I did finish it! okay I was thinking at the beganning that "oh its another Sesshomaru get Inuysha preg. and now have to take care of children story." Well Now i know I'm wrong. Its much more. Afther reading when Narku rape Inuysha, I kinda guess there going to be lots of ansgt in it. So I guess I wasn't completely wrong. When you put up the names I knew Inuko will be a name! I love that name now. Dog-child. I learn so much from yoru story! not much for me to write my own, but enough that I can know that there are good writers for this pairing.I'm not going to review every chapter cause I'm tire and don't have the engery to do so. SO I'm going to sum it up to few words. WEll WRITTEN,AWSOME,ANGST FILL LOVE STORY! It was so good and better then most inu/sess story I read. It had its funny moment, but the end made me confuse. There some question I like to know, but I'm going to chalk it up in the sqeuls[If there is a squeal]

What happen to naruka and inuysha daughter? Moon-child? Is Sess sons Inuko[love the name] and Reverse wild spirit okay? Who taking care of them?<<-- I know the last two question, isn't important, but my mind just had to know. Who is the demon that Rin set up with kagura? I need to know cause you said that we wouldn't be able to guess it! I know it can't be koga cause koga like rin. SO who is it!?!? Kagura and the mystery demon not the main part of the story, but you can't just put that in there and assume that we will know who it is! But oh well, I cna live with now knowing that part. now I'm going to check for a squeal.

I really did enjoy your story and hope you coutine to bless us with your amazing writing skillz.

Writer in training,
Shadow.Jinxs aka the anmine art teacher
p.s long review. @-@ must rest hand.
person colonolhavoc
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woah...........that was weird...........and really good....NUUUUUUUUU INOTAISHO'S DEAD!!!!!!!!! .....i guess I'll get over it. You better post again though! I want to know what happened to Tsukiko! I'm doing good getting ready for tests and such. Life's a bitch. I looked through your profile though and I didn't know you wrote all those inuyasha stories! I read almost all of those inu/sess stories! They were really good too! Man! All my fav. stories are going all angsty on me again! well that and I'm overdosing on surgur. but I'm sure that is completely beside the point here. well, duty calls. stupid duty............well my if you want to talk on lik aim or something just e-mail me at colonolhavoc8891@aol.com k? if you don't i understand. I think I'm crazy for even putting my e-mail up here! well momma always did say i was nuttier than a fruitcake guess I'm just provin her right. anyway if you want to talk nd stuff. ja ne! ^.^
person ArchNemesis
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch73
You killed PapaInu! How could you?!

Inuyasha will be alright, won't he? Sesshoumaru needs to get up. You can't pass out after delivering the killing blow to that bastard Naraku! You're family needs you, so get the hell up!

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~
person Archnemesis
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch74
Oh, no you don't! You don't leave me hanging like that...

I expect a sequel within the next week or so. You can have time off for Christmas (if you celebrate it), but no more. I wanna know what happened to the pup. And will Inuyasha be alright and how will he take the news of his father's death. Will Sesshoumaru be alright as well? Gosh, how will Izayoi take it? Oh, an let's not forget about Rin, Shippou, Kouga, and Kagara.

Excellent work! As always throughout the entire fic. I'm happy that I was able to be apart of this wonderful story of Inuyasha & Sesshoumaru's stormy mating and fragile relationship. Well, until the sequel, keep on writing.

ArchNemesis ^_~
person Jessica
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great ending to a great story. I can't wait for the sequel, so......PLEASE don't wait too long to post the first chapter! Keep up the good work!! ^_^