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person maria
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey this story is getting interesting. keep it up. update next chapter soon.
person SP777
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just NOW reading # 25 on Jan. 20...
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Wait a minute!!! Woah!!! On your last review, I wasn't saying you was calling me baka. :-)

It was called an 'expression' or a 'saying'. You've NEVER heard anybody do that before??? It's a ''play on words'', so to speak. As in I take what you say and change it to a meaning...I can't explain it if you've never heard anybody do that within your immediate circle of friends or family.

Anyway...

I'm still for Gina as a girl's name. It's unique.

As for a boy, SINCE my name [Kyoshi] was obliterated, I think 'Arekusu' & its meaning is a perfect combination of Inuyasha AND Sesshoumaru.

Revered Air : Sesshoumaru... Wild Spirit: Inuyasha...

don't you think?



PS- is it just me or has the subject of 'tail or not a tail' become a point of obsession oppossed to a typical rant? :-)
person Deity
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chapter, as always. ^_^ And it seems plausible that Kouga and Sessoumaru would have tails for such reasons. I think it's pretty cool if it were true, and it probably is. ^_^ Anyway, as I said befor, aswome chap. and please keep up the good work. Hmm....until your next update, Bye! ^_^
person Snowfall
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww. That was such a sweet chappie. Ooooh, and Sesshoumaru chuckled and smiled. Warm fuzzies all around. Loved it. Yuko is so cute. I enjoyed that chapter very much. And...Yay!. Tsukiko is in the top! WooHoo! *snoopy dance* Take care of yourself and all.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person Naraku's mistress who ties him to the bed and rides him till he bleeds...
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? IT'S SO GOOD!

And now I'll go do my business! *Ties Naraku to the bed and rides him till he bleeds*
Oh yeah...
person Ryuko
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Forgive me for being a stickler (because I am, if you haven't noticed. ^^;)...it's -masu. Ohayou gozaimasu.
And whee! For bringing Yuko back. Like her, I do. Still...o.O 26 chaps so far, ne? I get the feeling this story will get up into the high thirties at least before it's finished...
Keep it up!
person Tryst
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I may have left a review under stolen innocence or bitch of the gods, well, i decided to sign up. anyhow, here's a couple names i like. both male.

Keitaro

Shinsei


person Ryuko
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmn...Interesting. Can't wait to find out about the pups. Anywho, I only just realized, as I was reading today's update, that I never actually voted. So!
We can have up to five for each, ne?
For boys: Inuko (^^), Akira, Kyo (since Kiyoshi is no longer on the list), Yuki, and Hikaru.
For girls: Akiko, Moriko, Hotaru, Suzume, and Takara.
person Deity
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome as always. Wow, your now done with the twenty fifth chapter.....this stories come a long way. And about that tail thing, I never knew peope thought it was a tail, if it was, wouldn't it be smaller? Anyway, keep up the good work and until your next chapter comes out, Bye! ^_^
person uzamaki liliana
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
silly rin I hope you start to write about yasha and seshou soon and it would be so hard on seshou if yahsa had narakus kiddies
thax for the update