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by Avarwen

person Naraku's mistress who ties him to the bed and rides him till he bleeds...
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww....Pups! Yay! Wait...Naraku's pups? Their supposed to be Sessh's pups!

BAD NARAKU! *Spank*

Naraku- Ouch...

*Ties Naraku to the bed and rides him till he bleeds*

Good story as always!
person Crazy Fangirl 0098 Sesshy
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic...Wonderful... *Tear*
person HoshiinoTenshi
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Thanks for taking my suggestions. Update soon.
person Snowfall
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! *jumps up and down* Sesshoumaru didn't reject Inuyasha and he decided that he would care for the pups even if they are Naraku's. That would be a hard decision to make and an even more difficult one to carry out. I'm certain that he will have a lot of inner turmoil over that one. Well written as always. BTW, I love the old woman.

Okay, I picked a boy's name, Akira, which means intelligence and brightness. Okay, so the boys have acted a bit immature, but Sesshoumaru gives off an aura of intelligence while Inuyasha's emotional side is very bright. They may both be warriors, but that is what they are, not who they are. Both are physically brilliant...hehe. Inuyasha's eyes shine with the sun as does Sesshoumaru's hair. Sesshoumaru's contemplative and somber air tempers any foolishness. Inuyasha is smart too, it just takes him a little longer to learn his lessons. But his instincts are usually good. So, a male born of them both could have both a shining quality in his personality and a brilliant intelligence to match!

As, for the girl, (I know that your probably sick of hearing it) but my vote is still with Tsukiko. I think that she should have Inuyasha's sharp instincts and Sesshoumaru's ruthless attitude. No one would fuck with her. Hehe.

Can't wait til the next chappie.

Snowfall
person SP777 con't
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
when I say popular name, I mean BABY name.
person Tryst
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was a rather decent chapter. Though, as for naming those pups, some advice, which names do YOU like? as for other matter's, why do i get the feeling that Naraku is going to be a dad? well, whatever, when naming those pups, think about who their father/mother is. what would he name them?
person foxykittykat
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it! i won't add any more names. lol. is it okay to vote for my own? if not okay. i think i saw someone put 'Yoshi' on their so i vote for that one.
person SP777
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
‘How come you always know the right thing to say?’ He asked, and Takehiko, happy with her husbands suddenly uplifting mood,

-My...MY!!! SOMEone has been burning the midnight oil too much, you did mean Izayoi? :-)

Oh, by the way, I personally don't pay much attention to your 'sarcasm' because if someone 'wrote the book' on it, I contributed a few chapters myself. :-)

In other words, I am sarcastic by nature, to the point I don't talk to folks online much anymore. Too many sensitive people I've encountered, to the point it becomes a major headache trying to tip-toe around folks.

It's hard not being able to be yourself online with complete strangers. But that's what we all are..complete strangers.

O_o ....okay, now that's said & done.
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Onto the review...

What tha' HELL??!!?? Why is it EVERYTIME I think Inuyasha & Sesshomaru will have some down-time this happens!!!

Here we have a 'tender' moment, when...BOOM!!!!

You screw-up with...'oh, by the way the babies might not be yours.'

Couldn't they have, or Inuyasha, been happy for 15 minutes??? JUST 15 minutes!!!

*sigh* O_O

So, how was that for a rant? :-)


PS- I have to admit this, BUT...there is one popular name on here that has NO imagination or 'that certain something' to me, I won't say what it is but think about it for a second.
person HoshiinoTenshi
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You throughly addicted me to this story. Your writing is amazing. Its like being on cocaine but I like it please continue, update soon. Oh and I like Moriko and Tsukiko. If you are taking anymore suggest since I am late to the story I would like to suggest Shinkei (girl- god's grace) Shinzo (boy- god's gift). And in reference to Izayoi's name it means sixteen-day-old moon. Oh and to Onigumo his name is Oni- demon or devil and gumo or spelled kumo- is spider.
person Virgo's Kiss
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aiee! Too awesome!^^ ...er... *coughs* Sorry 'bout that. I just read the whole story and I guess that's the effect. I really have to start acting my age... But I love this so far. I can't really describe what I like so much about this, but i'll start with the basics. Great descriptions, those are, as most know, one the most important parts in a story. I also like how you have them all in the story. Er, no more to say about that point.^^; Cool chapter titles too, I myself can never seem to think of any good ones. And- er... geez, i'm at a loss for words. I'll continue on to my questions. Is Inu pregnant or what? The suspense is killing me here! But I guess i'll just have to wait.... i'm not sure if anyone else has asked this, and there's probably a logical answer somewhere i'm just not seeing, but can a hanyou get a hanyou pregnant? For some reason i'm just not sure. I mean, could they both be? But I doubt it since you earlier said something about the other having to be the seme for a hanyou male to be impregnated. (O.o wow... one of my first big words of the day...) I have a feeling this whole review made zero sense so: I really like this story and please update it soon?^^'
-an anonymous reviewer a.k.a Virgo's Kiss