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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chapters and i doubled over in laughter when sesshomaru got slapped and by that healer no less. that was sooooooooooooo funny. sesshomaru was in accual shock because no one had ever done that to him before and it was a great shock to sesshomaru.but it made him see reason though.
then talking with rin and letting her tell her part of the story and why she betrayed inuyasha the way she did was very good.
i love the way sesshomaru fusses over inuyasha and helps him all the time and how he pressed his ear to inuyasha's belly to that he could feel and hear the pups moving and rumbling about inside of his mate.
that was such and incredible moment.*sighs*
then watching the get intimate again and kiss and sesshomaru ask if inuyasha was ok about this and inuyasha saying that's its the only way that he'll get rid of him and heal. then they kiss again.
i loved all the new chapters and yes i want all of the names you have the deleted ones and ones that you came up with and ones that have meanings and that don't have meanings and the ones that were given by review and all of the others too.
my cousin is looking for help with names and her baby shower is next month and her baby is due at the end of next month. so i need to find a good japanese name for the baby.
my e-mail is miiko_hargraves@yahoo.com
great updates and great story.
update soon onegai
see ya round
ja ne
then talking with rin and letting her tell her part of the story and why she betrayed inuyasha the way she did was very good.
i love the way sesshomaru fusses over inuyasha and helps him all the time and how he pressed his ear to inuyasha's belly to that he could feel and hear the pups moving and rumbling about inside of his mate.
that was such and incredible moment.*sighs*
then watching the get intimate again and kiss and sesshomaru ask if inuyasha was ok about this and inuyasha saying that's its the only way that he'll get rid of him and heal. then they kiss again.
i loved all the new chapters and yes i want all of the names you have the deleted ones and ones that you came up with and ones that have meanings and that don't have meanings and the ones that were given by review and all of the others too.
my cousin is looking for help with names and her baby shower is next month and her baby is due at the end of next month. so i need to find a good japanese name for the baby.
my e-mail is miiko_hargraves@yahoo.com
great updates and great story.
update soon onegai
see ya round
ja ne
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you cannot remove my reviews because they are actual reviews. So there! Great chapter. Rin confuses me, but great ending. I love your portrayal of Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. Especially Sesshoumaru as the protective mate. And I do believe that Inuyasha would be able to understand Rin's predicament. The ending was so sweet. Sesshoumaru was actually outwardly showing concern for Inuyasha's well being before taking him. That was a real 'feel good' chapter.
As always, my vote for a girl is Tsukiko and now again my vote for male is Akira. Mmm. Didn't check on that one in your notes. I'll go back.
As always, anxiously awaiting your next chappie.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
As always, my vote for a girl is Tsukiko and now again my vote for male is Akira. Mmm. Didn't check on that one in your notes. I'll go back.
As always, anxiously awaiting your next chappie.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!.... NO FREAKIN WAY!!!!... sorry i havn't reviewed in a while... u kept me busy when i got back though... ^_^... but like i was saying... NO FREAKIN' WAY!!!! WHY DID U STOP THERE... I WANT A SEX SCENE!!!!... yea... well thats just me... anyways relly good chs u relly getting good at this... wish u hadn't stopped there...i wanted a sex scene sooooooooo bad... and wat took Rin so long to get out of the room... i thought she would never leave!!... i'm gonna update soon and i'v got a new story u should check out thats coming on the 1st of Feb... it's going to be like 14-15chs... i still working on it but it'll be good... there better b a sex scene in the next few chs... killing for another one... PUPS R SESSY'S!!!... anyway... update soon... blahblahblah... and all that jazz good ch keep it up... cya
Rocky
this review was actually short ::gasp::
=3
Rocky
this review was actually short ::gasp::
=3
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hah! Now that was good. Are you going to have InuYasha slap him next? By the way, is Rin going to become Aunt Rin? Is Kagura going to betray her? What is Sesshomaru going to do about the possibilty of the pups might not being his? Well, however this goes, I'm sure I'll enjoy it. Thanks for at least giving my challenge a chance. I aim to to challenge. Sent you an e-mail with more details. Be hearing from you?
Thanks for the update.
Thanks for the update.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think it makes the story intersting that way too. ^_^ I liked this chapter, a littler interaction with the pups! Even though it was just them squirming. ^_^ Lately it seems as though everyone's tired. It's weird... anyway, great job on the chapter and as always, you did a great job. Keup up the good woek and when the next chapter is posted, until then, Bye! ^_^
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You did reply to me in the last chapter. lol. Anyway, loved the slap part. i can see his facial expression in my head. lmao. You do have a point that it is in their nature to be that way. Loved the chapter wish it was a bit longer thats it. Update soon.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! another sess/iy mpreg that's really good!! yatta!! i've really hit the jackpot lately i guess lol, since *good* mpreg is a new obsession of mine.. and yours is not only well written, but soooo many chapters!! O.o awesome! i hope it still has quite a few chapters to go too lol (cuz i'm greeeeeedy :p )
anyway, i love how this is going so far.. i think it's good you still have them clash here and there, though they've mated, because being COMPLETELY lovey dovey all the time would go against their basic nature, though of course their now unique bond would certainly tone things down.. all in all, i think you're pulling their relationship off nicely..
and sesshy saying he'd still care for inuyasha and the pups no matter WHO the father was.. *awwwwww* though i firmly believe they're sesshy's anyway, otherwise why was inuyasha already feeling weak and tired and all around odd even before naraku raped him?? so.. yeah *sess for papa* ^__~
as for names, i really like Inuko for some reason, though i suspect this is one that is made up of japanese words and not an actual pre-established name? so i just thought i'd tell you, generally, though the word "ko" on its own would denote "child", when used at the end of a name, it is for a girl (hence why Akiko would be strictly a girl's name, though Aki means almost the same thing and is for girls OR boys..); there MAY be exceptions, but i've never seen any and everything i've read during my own research for japanese character names, says "ko" is a girl's name ending..
other names i like besides Inuko: Akiko, Tsukiko, Ryuji, Aki, Riku
well, that's my two cents for now, keep up the good work!!
~ lg
anyway, i love how this is going so far.. i think it's good you still have them clash here and there, though they've mated, because being COMPLETELY lovey dovey all the time would go against their basic nature, though of course their now unique bond would certainly tone things down.. all in all, i think you're pulling their relationship off nicely..
and sesshy saying he'd still care for inuyasha and the pups no matter WHO the father was.. *awwwwww* though i firmly believe they're sesshy's anyway, otherwise why was inuyasha already feeling weak and tired and all around odd even before naraku raped him?? so.. yeah *sess for papa* ^__~
as for names, i really like Inuko for some reason, though i suspect this is one that is made up of japanese words and not an actual pre-established name? so i just thought i'd tell you, generally, though the word "ko" on its own would denote "child", when used at the end of a name, it is for a girl (hence why Akiko would be strictly a girl's name, though Aki means almost the same thing and is for girls OR boys..); there MAY be exceptions, but i've never seen any and everything i've read during my own research for japanese character names, says "ko" is a girl's name ending..
other names i like besides Inuko: Akiko, Tsukiko, Ryuji, Aki, Riku
well, that's my two cents for now, keep up the good work!!
~ lg
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch26 The servant was a nice touch. Poor InuYasha wasn't so sure what to make of her and Sesshoumaru was just as shocked as his mate. I hope to see more of her in coming chapters.
I'm delighted to see that InuYasha doesn't suffer any bad after affects of the rape, but that little scene with Yuko when she first entered their bedchamber seemed to be a normal reaction. However, what will happen if and when InuYasha sees Naraku again?
Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Nemesis ^_~
I'm delighted to see that InuYasha doesn't suffer any bad after affects of the rape, but that little scene with Yuko when she first entered their bedchamber seemed to be a normal reaction. However, what will happen if and when InuYasha sees Naraku again?
Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Nemesis ^_~
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, me again.. i was just thinking about the "ko" thing and decided to look it up again on this site: http://www.japanorama.com/namesinj.html
and it does list one example of a boy's name that ends in "ko" so if you wanted to use Inuko for a boy that would still be cool ^__~
uh.. yeah that's all :p
~ lg
and it does list one example of a boy's name that ends in "ko" so if you wanted to use Inuko for a boy that would still be cool ^__~
uh.. yeah that's all :p
~ lg
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update^_^
Just as a sidenote: How can someone claim they own the rights to use the name Aini, for it's my mothers name? O_O
Just as a sidenote: How can someone claim they own the rights to use the name Aini, for it's my mothers name? O_O