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love it!!! onegai update soon. I really wanna know who the pups belong to. the suspence is killing!!!
i also vote for Tsukiko

Poor Inuyasha, so chained to Sesshoumaru. I wonder if Sesshoumaru even realizes it.
Perhaps Inuyasha knows that he is safest around Sesshoumaru too and that is also a
part of his being so clingy. He been so recently attacked. So, Naraku would keep Inuyasha
alive if the pups were his. I sure hope they aren't. Bastard. He's just plain creepy. Another
well written chapter. There are still typos, but I don't mind because you get the chapters out
so quickly and I love this story.

Well, you know that my vote for names is still Tsukiko and Akira.

Snowfall

One question. What does their father think of all this? Though I like immensly where this is going. Update soon.

lol! yay for the effects of pregnancy!! erm.. well i can't help but pay attention to those little details, as i have a child myself.. and did not have the blissful 2-4 months of "morning sickness" but 10 neverending months of 24-7 sickness that could only be calmed by pills they give to chemo patients for their nausea, at $25 a pill, and had to be hospitalized for malnutrition when i couldn't keep anything down for two weeks straight...(before i got the insurance to pay for the pills) erm, yeah, sorry for the TMI :p the nausea started about 2 weeks after i got pregnant, but i didn't *feel* movement from inside until 4 months and didn't SEE and feel movement outside until the end of the 5th..

anyway, so since you're going more towards the dog's version of pregnancy, i will just sit back and relax and let you take us through it lol, cuz i've never had a dog that went through pregnancy and haven't researched it thoroughly enough to say anything XD

SO, as far as the chapter goes, it was great, a good start into the actual effects of pregnancy on inuyasha, not just the sickness, but his disposition and demeanor towards sesshoumaru and wanting to keep his mate happy and unangered... i look forward to reading more!! (which i'm sure will be soon cuz DAMN you update fast! :D )

~ lg

I hope he has more than one pup and none of them end up being Narku's(sp), but I also hope that Inuyasha and the pups/litter give Sess. lots of hell. It would be fun to see how Sess. would handle children like Inuyasha and himself and some with a combo personality.

OMG! Absolutely awesome!

You have to update soon! BTW: Can you have a lemon or something in the next chapter?
And even more important: When will the sexiest demon in the world (Naraku) come back into the story?
I miss him!

Naraku- Missed me? *Smirk*

Me- YAY! *Ties him to the bed and rides him till he bleeds*

Now I'm happy again!

Waaahh? You cut off really quick there. But Sess is in for a surprise. Mother dogs are rather aggressive when threatened or bothered within that first 48 or so hours. LOL. So, is this going to follow the nine weeks set up or more of a monthly cycle? All relevant questions. My own dog acted in such a way when she had her puppies a while ago. Nearly took my hand off. Rott's. Geez. Though she was even tougher on the father. HEHEHE. If your going that route, then I'm not worried about Inuyasha. I'm more worried about Sess, Naraku, and the rest of Inuyasha's family. Wow, that would be really good. Alright, update soon. And take your time on the other fic. LOL.

sweet, two chapters to read ^__^ ah well... if they are actually naraku's i can deal, makes for more angst :p i'll just wait and see heehee..

anyway, the part with rin grabbing sess and pushing his head to inuyasha's belly to hear the pups was too cute lol, i can imagine his indignation until he got the reward of hearing em.. wow she was able to see the movement huh? so does inuyasha have a belly on him now? of course, who knows how fast they're growing since he's hanyou and sess is youkai (well, hopefully you of course, lol), but daaamn!! hmm.. did he ever have any morning sickness (even though it's not necessarily just in the morn..)?? i don't remember right now *is tired* but if not, damn lucky.. well esp w/all the other shit he had to deal with.. of course maybe the herbs and stuff the healer was giving him helped with that as well... lol don't mind me i'm just rambling my internal thoughts..

anyway, sesshoumaru wanting it to be all about inuyasha's pleasure in the last chap was so sweet too dude.. and lol one "the bastardization of his name" haha that was great, i quoted it to my friend Ren and she was like, lmao

well, that's all for now.. oh wait, a note on the "koibito" thing, it doesn't mean love, it means lover (though of course you could think of it as being shortened from lover to love and still being used to call someone that, but technically it's true meaning is lover/sweetheart: http://rut.org/cgi-bin/j-e/dosearch?sDict=on&H=PS&L=J&T=koibito&WC=none&FG=r&BG=b&S=26

for love, just for added info, there are many words and variations on their use, the most common being suki (like/love) and ai (love) and aishiteru (i love you); Trussel's EclectiCity is good for alot of japanese definitions, though it doesn't have EVERYTHING, but i use it most often... here's a link to the Japanese/English translation page: http://rut.org/cgi-bin/j-e/dict

ok that's all for real now :p

~ lg

Aw, that was way too short. Hihi. So, he's gonna be a lazy puppy for awhile. At least he will be inside and out of danger. I wonder if Sesshoumaru will nest with Inuyasha until the preggers hanyou has more energy. This is Sesshoumaru's perfect opportunity to show some authority over Inuyasha. That would be most fun to see. Can we have some of that? Huh? Huh? I want to see a whiney puppy sucking up. LOL Maybe he can manipulate Sesshoumaru with those wide innocent eyes that have the oddest blink sometimes. It's rare in the televised anime, but so darn cute. Nice lead in to your next chapter.

Snow

domo arigato gozaimasu for the names that you sent.

it will be a big help because i've found out that she's having a boy and i've already seen some names that i like for boys.

here are my votes

yoshi
kiyoko
makusu
bureiku
shion*
arekusu
shinsei**
takara
haruko
tsukiko*
naomi
kenaku
keitaro

those are the names that i vote for

the names that have * next to them i vote for again so if there are 2 of them i vote twice

thanks for the update and i can't wait to see what happens next

will the pups be born? will inuyasha finally eat something and come out of sesshomaru's room?

i wonder if they'll take a bath together because that could help inuyasha heal more mentally and phisically too and emotionally as well. that's what rape victims do they was or bathe and that makes them feel a bit better. that's what i've read.

will inuyasha's belly get rounder and start to show that he's with pups? that would be so cool and to have sesshomaru standing in the garden with behind inuyasha wraping him in his arms and holding him close. while the wind blows there silvery manes around them. as sesshomaru wispers my mate as he carresses inuyasha's round tummy in small circular motions. he wispers again nuzzling inuyasha's neck "my beautiful mate" inuyasha turns into sesshomaru's embrace and looks into his sun kissed eyes and kisses him full on the mouth. sesshomaru returns the kiss.

there has to be another lemon but when are the pups going to be born because i was thinking after the pups are born then that would heal inuyasha because the pups are sesshomaru's and that heals inuyasha finally and completely.

they make love out side in a secluded spot in the gardens. it has a small river running throught it and a water fall behind it making a small pond that flows into a hot spring. trees suround them and fields of flowers around them while they lay in the clearing of grass. sesshomaru slowly undresses inuyasha kissing him ans he removes the kimono and hakamas. well you can use your imagination from there because i'm sure that you have a wonderful lemon already written and that's just my fantasy and opinion anyways.

onegai update soon

i also have reviews as wicked and princess of the western lands so if you see those names around just know that its me

see ya round

ja ne