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Well, wasn't that a surprise to me when I saw that you posted a new chapter imediatly after I replied to the one before this. Strange really... anyway, I was actually wondering when Inuyasha was going to change, and there it was. ^_^ Well, this chapter, just like the last... and the one before that, and all the others, was wonderfully written and all that good stuff. Anyway... keep up the good work and until Chapter thirty seven is posted, Bye! ^_^

5 seconds after i review for ur last ch. i go back to the idex only to find that u updated.... u r too fast or me... but i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv the ch.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! don't have much to say here... um... that was a little suspencsive... i gess... giv me another limon while ur at it... hehe... i ask too much as a reviewer... its funny!!! =3... ever heard of Gravitation... it's an anime that i resently found out about and the pairing is M/M... hot... i'm gonna watch the series with my cuz and bf tonight... gtg cya!!!!

Rocky

Do not take this the wrong way, but I've just finished reading chapter 14 and one thing really sticks in my craw. On 14, you spent half the damn pages on thanks and replying to reviews. Why? These people review that's good, in fact that's great. However, why do you think me or any other average reader would want to know what you discuss with your reviewers. Since most of us want the fic, we don't. In fact it's like listening to half a conversation because I have no idea what your reviewers said in the first place. I do not nor do I know of others who read other people's reviews on a fic.

So when you spend half a chapter with 'thank you's and replies it get tedious. And no matter how good a fic may be to me, I will not scroll through four pages of thank yous to get to it. As an author when someone obligingly gives me a review, I reply to them. I do. I email each and every one of them with thanks and a personalized reply. Sometimes I can't sit at a comp and do all of them at once, so i copy the revies, take them home, come up with replies and copy/paste them when I do have time.

Now, the fact that these reviews are taking up more and more space and I'm getting less and less fic, means I'll probably just say "forget it" and go read something else.

Oh, and before you take this as a flame or my being mean, try to take this as constructive criticism. Since I probably would enjoy this story more, if I didn't have to scroll through pages on non-fic related garbage.

Chapter 34:

Hmm, the comment about Myoga sounded a little ominous. You've left me wondering. I never would have thought to pair Rin up with Kouga. Nice going. I hope that Sesshoumaru really is beginning to soften up about Rin. Just because he understands doesn't mean that he forgives her. Well, Inuyasha is being a bit offish with Sesshoumaru. I wonder how long that will last. Well written as always.

Sorry if my review is not all that enthusiastic, but I'm not well and this is the best that I can do for now.

On to my review of the next chapter.

Snowfall

chapter 35:

Oooh. I forgot to say in the last chapter, I really don't trust Kagura and hope that she doesn't turn out evil.

Okay, that was a really sweet chapter with Rin. Her wise words to Kouga were a pleasant surprise. I liked the mischievous little kiss. That was cute and heartwarming. Wonder if there is some trouble brewing for Kouga that will bring Naraku into play.

I think that if your reviews are low, it may be because people really don't know what to say to the focus on supporting characters. Perhaps those scenes would be better as a part of a chapter featuring the main characters. It's just a thought.

Snowfall

excelent writing as usual. and honestly i didn't know that you were no longer accepting names, i sorta tend not to read most of the before and after stuff of the stories.

hey, that was fast. cool. poor inuyasha. it was so touching when sesshomaru said that. please continue.

Your disinterest comment made me want to tell you I was still interested(and I am)...but this chapter was....well.....boring.

I don't leave reviews all the time I just wanted to let you know that I am enjoying you story and am a faithful reader of yours.

^_^ Great chapter, I loved it as always. I thought this was a sweet chapter... parts of it. Other parts were funny. ^_^ When I look for people I look in strange places too. Never drawers though... anyway, keep up the good work and until chapter thirty five is posted, Bye! ^_^