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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay, finally had time to catch up on the latest chapters! wowwww you got alot done :p Rin and Kouga gonna get together, eh? that'll be cute... wonder what's next on the agenda for Kagura and Naraku.. and wow, Inuyasha's human night and changing in Sesshoumaru's arms, and Sess' reaction to it--very endearing.. (lol makes me want to watch some human-Inuyasha eps..) can't wait to read the continuation to that last scene ^___^ (whenever AFF re-enables the edit options..)
~ lg
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm gone 1 1/2 weeks and see what I miss? This is what happens when you start working over night and come home in the morning like a partial zombie. That is until you sit down on your couch...and SUDDENLY have the energy to watch TV, eat McDonald's pancakes AND look at a DVD. :-)
You know I WAS going to mention, Kanna IS the oldest incarnation born from Naraku. Don't ask why..that's just Naraku's twisted mind, but what does that say about the Creator of the story??? O_o
Anyway, it's your story so do what ya' want. Besides everything else is changed storywise anyhow...and THAT is what makes fanfiction. Making an existing story your OWN.
By the way, votes for GINA & Arekusu...it's gotta be something different, you see those other names almost ALL the time in fanfictions & animes.
A father was reading Bible stories to his young son. He read, "The man named Lot was warned to take his wife and flee out of the city, but his wife looked back and was turned to salt." His son asked, "What happened to the flea?"
Too bad you can't use that when one of the pups are born since I don't think many Japanese were familiar with the Bible stories associated in North America back in that Era. Unless you change the wording around.
You know I WAS going to mention, Kanna IS the oldest incarnation born from Naraku. Don't ask why..that's just Naraku's twisted mind, but what does that say about the Creator of the story??? O_o
Anyway, it's your story so do what ya' want. Besides everything else is changed storywise anyhow...and THAT is what makes fanfiction. Making an existing story your OWN.
By the way, votes for GINA & Arekusu...it's gotta be something different, you see those other names almost ALL the time in fanfictions & animes.
A father was reading Bible stories to his young son. He read, "The man named Lot was warned to take his wife and flee out of the city, but his wife looked back and was turned to salt." His son asked, "What happened to the flea?"
Too bad you can't use that when one of the pups are born since I don't think many Japanese were familiar with the Bible stories associated in North America back in that Era. Unless you change the wording around.
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol! Sorry about the names! I totally forgotten about InuPapa's Advisor dude! Lol! Such a grrrrrrrrrrrreat fanfiction! I absolutly looooooooove it!!!! Inu was funny in this one! Were the hell is INUPAPA!!? I love that guy, he's such an idiot lol! Sess and Inu fluff LOOOOOOOVE IT!! Keep writing, it's a great fanfiction!! L8RZ! (^ O ^)/~
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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story I've been reading it since you posted the 8 chapter but never reviewed before but i am now and my i suggest that you have Inuyasha bear Naraku’s and Inuyasha’s pups that could prove very interesting in both short and long runs for one the difference between the time a half demon and 3 quarter demon takes to develop could curse early birth for Sesshoumaru’s pups and later the pup's growing up with the constant disapproval from others and maybe even the rejection of there siblings
I vote for Blade
But I think Hikari is a good name too it means light
I vote for Blade
But I think Hikari is a good name too it means light
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch33-36 Whoa! That was a lot to take in. What's up w/ Rin? One minute she's looking for her sister and then the next she gets side track by Kouga. Is he fallen for her? The would be interesting to see how that little romance turn out. Gosh, poor InuYasha just can't catch a break. He was so worried about Sesshoumaru throwing him out and never seeing him again because of his transformation that he never stopped to consider the other possibility. Sesshoumaru is quite the character. He likes what he sees with the 'human' side of InuYasha but is not so keen of the 'human-weakness' side.
Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Although, with things going how they're going I'm not sure when that will be. Please update as soon as the system is working again. I want to know if Rin ever remembers what she was hunting Kaguara down for, and if InuYasha gives Sesshoumaru consent to continue on that intimate journey that he (InuYasha) started.
Nemesis ^_~
Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Although, with things going how they're going I'm not sure when that will be. Please update as soon as the system is working again. I want to know if Rin ever remembers what she was hunting Kaguara down for, and if InuYasha gives Sesshoumaru consent to continue on that intimate journey that he (InuYasha) started.
Nemesis ^_~
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far this has been a good read, the characters seem to be real and their dialog flows very nicely.
Though when you explain things about the culture of the dog demons it has a feel of a text book. You might want to try different ways of explaining to the reader instead of just telling them. Like having characters telling eachother what is going on or what something means. *the best novels are always delt like this ^__~*
As for the baby names . . . I'm not going to pick one but I'll give you a nice peace of info on how parents choose names. They mostly choose names not by the means really but by their favorite Kanji. Or at least this is what I've been told myself. Also Kanji and the names themselves can have different meanings then just from the sound or Romanji of the name. For example Cloud and Spider sound the same but the kanji is totaly different.
Also Inuyasha means Dog Demon . . . I know this for sure.
I can wait for the next chapter. *sorry if I have spelling mistakes and what not; I'm running on almost no sleep*
Though when you explain things about the culture of the dog demons it has a feel of a text book. You might want to try different ways of explaining to the reader instead of just telling them. Like having characters telling eachother what is going on or what something means. *the best novels are always delt like this ^__~*
As for the baby names . . . I'm not going to pick one but I'll give you a nice peace of info on how parents choose names. They mostly choose names not by the means really but by their favorite Kanji. Or at least this is what I've been told myself. Also Kanji and the names themselves can have different meanings then just from the sound or Romanji of the name. For example Cloud and Spider sound the same but the kanji is totaly different.
Also Inuyasha means Dog Demon . . . I know this for sure.
I can wait for the next chapter. *sorry if I have spelling mistakes and what not; I'm running on almost no sleep*
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey! i love this story it took three days to read cause i had to stop and go to work but it was well worth the wait.
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the ones who have lost interest are crazy! this story is wonderful. hey, can you put a small inutaisho/izayoi thing in here i think you know what i mean ;) if not oh well. update soon!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
U R AMAZING!!!!!! i'm stuk doing homework and projects and planning to get an apartment and get the f*** out of this crapy house and live with my boyfriend getting ready to be a legal "adult" and here you r busting out ch. after ch. after ch. after ch.... leaving me to ketch up in only half a day?!?!?!?!!! ... gees u work fast... =3 but that's good!!! luv what's going on with kouga and rin there... thry kinda make a cute couple... but anyways... great ch.... wait ch.s... cuz u write lik a writer on a sugar high... wait... r u eating too much sugar??... lol jk well update soon... lik in a day or two... not in the next hour... suspence me in 1 of the next chs... cuz i havn't lost interest lik u might of thought i had... just been busy... so giv me a cliffy in the next ch... or so... i wanna be coming to this site every hour on the hour until i can see wat happenes to our favorite luvrs... SESS + INU ALL DA WAY!!!!!!! cya around!!! =3
Rocky
Rocky
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved that chapter. it was so sweet. I like the pairing, it does seem right for your story. ^_^ You've done a wonderful job with your story so far, keep it up! Heh, anyway... nicely written and great chapter, all the usual things, uh... I guess until chapter thirty six is posted, Bye! ^_^