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i liked this chapter, it was funny how the pup bit rin and how they all responded to it, and then to find out it drank blood and inu kinda freaked out, that was priceless. can't wait for the next chapter.

Hi! I love your fic! I thought that the idea of the pups feeding on blood instead of milk was a rather original way of solving the issue of inuyasha's lack of -ahem- feminine parts =) Great job!

You have absolutely no idea who I am. I just started reading your story last week on a whim. The chapters may be short (XP) but your style is pretty good, and you keep along with the attitude of the characters so well! I was actually aching to read the updates over the week and couldn't, and I was practically jumping up and down when I saw that you had updated up to chapter 50! I love your story, and this chapter was expecially good! Keep up the good work! I can't wait for you to update!

ch50...Was kick ass! I that was so awesome. Are you sure that you never been through that? Because it gave a very clear and descriptive picture of each birth right down to wanting to kill Sesshoumaru. Even though I have not personally been through natural childbirthing (thank god) I saw my sister's on video and let me tell you it looked fuckin' painful.

The girl pup is not Naraku's...it can't be? Just let it be some type of side effect from the rape or something. I think that would just be cruel for all of them if she turned out to be that bastard's child.

And you had to end it there didn't you? Ggrrh! I thought I was bad with cliffhangers but you...you take the prize for that one.

Excellent work! I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

Nemesis ^_~

from the time i started reading this story to now i am awe-struck. i mean this story is beyond good if you ask me. keep it up and can't wait for the next chapter.

That was classic! as I read down I was cracking up at Inuyasha. He didn't care what the healers were saying, he was going to have that baby no matter what! Call it what you like but when my water broke I thought I sprung a leak. Luckily, I was at home when it happened. I can't wait for the pups to be born.

Oh, I wounder how Sesshoumaru is going to react to being a daddy. Inu no Taisho and Izayoi must not know yet - this should be interesting. And mention of them, I must admit that when it got hot and heavy with them I was thinking (hm, Inuyasha or Sesshoumaru should hear them going at it) and low and behold it's there. I nearly fell out of my chair for that one. Poor Sesshoumaru, he just might have images of his parents now every time he sees them or for the most part blush from the thought.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon, I hope to see Rin and Shippou in action again, maybe get Kouga back on track ^_~

Nemesis ^_~

ch45...That was too funny. I love Shippou he's a cutie pie.

Rin is turning into my favorite for this. She's going to make sure that her sister gets hooked up with someone no matter what. I'm rather shocked that Kouga joined in the mate hunter, so to speak, but I guess that's because he wanted to be near Rin...whatever turns him on, right?

Excellent work! Can't wait to get to the next chapter.

Nemesis ^_~

ch46...Well, at least someone is talking to Inuyasha about another mean of birthing his pups. I was in the hospital for a day and a half before they came up with that decision.

I love the chapter. Inuyasha is Inuyasha. I'm surprised that Sesshoumaru didn't get shouted at as well seeing as he was the one who put Inuyasha in the sitiuation in the first place, but seeing that the healers made the suggestion...

I'm sure the Sesshoumaru will talk Inuyasha into having the surgery if he knew that would be the *only* way for him to have the pups safely.

Excellent work! I'm off to the next chapter.

Nemesis ^_~

Ah, the joys of pregnancy...I remember those days and can totally relate to Inuyasha. Poor Sesshoumaru. Just how many pups will they have or is that a surprise? Well, it will all be over soon, but what's this, something is stirring in the air and Inuyasha can sense it. And Kaugra is being an out right bitch. I do Rin someone for her because it seems she needs to get laid.

Shippou was a nice touch. I hope to see more of him ^_~ and Sounga was being its nasty little self, nothing new there.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~

hi, i'm a new reader and shall be eagerly anticipating new updates. quite a good story you have here. also, i'm sure that someone has already explained this, but the "ko" at the end of names marks it as a female's. it is the character meaning "child."