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by Avarwen

person Juukai
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CURSE YOU AND YOUR CLIFFY! CURSE YOU LIVE WITH NARAKU IN HHHHEEEEEEEEEEEE-(o.o)-CK! Bet ya didn't expect that, now did ya? BUT STILL< I CURSE YOU! And right before I nice sexy, or sex-filled, take your pick of wording, night too....I will kill Naraku myself, god damn it. GGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR....Update soon, pwease? ;-;
person nette
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please tell me its naraku who came becuz if it is damn, he always ruins a nice moment. i wonder wat sesshy's going to do and wat will inu do. ooooohhhhhh you just hav to update soon.
person Fluffy
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! OMG! OMG! NO NO NO!!!! You can't leave it right there!! O_O THAT IS SOOOOO EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you update soon! Oh...and I hope Sesshou kills Naraku like DAMMM!!
person nette
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i lik the names especially the little boy's inuko, i wonder how he will react to his new name and that was nice how you had sesshy name the girl now he really can't say she's not his, well not biologically but you get wat i mean. anyway update soon.
person Juukai
schedule May 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Being scared is entirely up to youm you know. You decided. XD And to my knowledge I did not fry my eyes out reading your other stories. Well...short review. Still need to read your new chapter...
person Juukai
schedule May 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Names! Namesnamesnamesnamesnamesnamesnamesnamesnamesnamesnaaaaaaaaammmmmmeeeeeeessssss! X3 Can't wait to see what you named the pups. Ha, ha! Sessh can stop anything, even a band of wailing pups, without "saying" a thing! >3
person nette
schedule May 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was funny, poor inu having to feed the pups, i hope they grow out of drinking blood before inu can't take it anymore. i also thought the twist to have the girl only drink milk was good, a way to contrast it for her having human blood and not really demon. can't wait for the next chapter.
person Stevie
schedule May 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic so far! I read on AnimeNfo.com that Izayoi means 'sixteen day old moon' if that helps you any.
person Juukai
schedule May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I suppose you're right about me not knowing you either. ^-^; Never thought of it like that. And I was quite happy to find that this whim turned me towards a very good thing. XD You're pretty creative, even if you are just trying to use small clues and put together the pieces. I never would have seen the whole nursing idea coming. Though, I suppose that's what we autors do, ne? I got bored after reading your last chapter on Friday, and went and read every story but two that you have up. I think it might be safe to say I'm becoming a full-blown fan of yours! Scary, I know. But, anyway, keep 'em coming! I don't care what story, or whatever, just keep 'em coming cause I haven't found one of yours yet that I don't like! X3 Great job.
person ArchNemesis
schedule May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, let me live in my dream world for a little bit longer. I'm even going as far as to believe that the female pup IS Sesshoumaru's (not Naraku's) for the mere fact the Inuyasha's human form on the moonless has black hair and purplish-black eyes.

And yes, I did watch a video, my sister in fact giving birth. And like I said I was horrified by that and was happy to go through having a c-section, twice!

I laughed when the youngest pup bit Inuyasha. Nursing is a bitch. I don't care for how long you do for. I stopped nursing my son at five months because he had grown in teeth; and I stopped nursing my daughter at three months. I kept getting an infection and was passing it back and forth to each other.

Anyway, I loved the chapter. Izayoi looked like she was about to loose it there from seeing a the blood. Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~