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again good chapter. i really want to see inu kick naraku's ass for just a moment if possible or hav tsukiko scratch him, something :). and sessh i feel so sorry for him but at least he still has his children and wat will their father do. will he help out in finding inu. update soon and as always luved the chapter.

again luved the chapter and wish that u would kill naraku already but as we know thats not gonna happen as of yet so i wil suffer as inu suffers while that kumo bastard lives. as always can't wait to read more and update soon.

I like this story. My ONLY real problem is the use of parentheses. It's a little excessive. Because with them, you are calling attention to something important and further explaining it, if you do it too often it becomes awkward for some reason. Also you can use other methods to do this. Maybe by use of dashes or rearranged sentence structures. But overall, I like the story and the ideas.

I gotta say after reading #54 I ALMOST wanted to do a happy dance when I found out you had named one of the pups Arekusu. That name is definitely a combo of the 2 brothers personalities. Too bad there wasn't a Gina..oh well.

Anyway we are FINALLY getting to the nitty gritty and Naraku makes his sadistic appearance again, but I'm confident Inuyasha will get his chance of vengeance. Hell I'd like to see him cut loose....

Just taking the time to review a little bit...
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Man! What have you been doing updating every dating every 4 days?!? The last time I left before the site was down I was at #36....Good Lord! how did I miss 20 chapters??? I can see 9 or 10, but then again you did have a tendency to add chapters quick.

In #45, I liked how you explained how mates attract each other [through Kouga of course], even though I've seen it explained by various authors, not every one can make it sound plausible.

..and poor Sesshoumaru, an actual VICTIM of uncertainty while dealing with his mate. O_O ... :-)

anyway once I actually finish reading all of this I'll review again, in the meantime gotta go for now.

well i don't want to kill you but i do want to kill naraku damn spider demon. poor sessh :( i wonder wat his father and everyone else will think especially his father. i hope the pups are okay at least. please update soon. oh and don't let naraku do anything to tsukiko.

Another cliffy! You will be excecicuted violently as Naraku most likely will be! You evil, evil cliffy person, you! Update soon, though, yeah? I keep looking forward to reading new chapters every week. ^w^ Yes, I love your story. My boyfriend even has me explain it to him sime he won't ever read it since it's yaoi.

u meanie, but ur a meanie in a good way. damn that naraku. damn him to hell but wat will sesshy do, please hurry and update. this is torture :(

stop beieng so cruel make him disapear alrady. inuyasha has suffered enought!
please don't involve that litlle girl in something evil that be just plain cruel

Yep! That's the Sessh, amazing in every aspect! I like the names, personally. I especially liked how you made Tsukiko's birthmark. Tres supercool. XD And now, I shall go and read this other chapter miraculously waiting here and calling my name...