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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! I want him gone! I want to jump into the story and kill Naraku myself.....but seeing as 1. that can't happen and 2. if it did I would die a horrible death I'll just wait for the story to progress and hopefully InuTaisho will realize that if he shut up then Shesshomaru can go save Inuyasha already I mean really Inuyasha just got rapped again! and if they didn't spend that time talking Shesshomaru could have been out the house on his way over their right now! >.< Seriously tho' Naraku better die a horrible painful death or lose something Preferably the thing causing the pain *hint hint nudge nudge* ..ok I'll stop now..its your story do whatever you want w/ it you are the author and you really shouldn't litsen to people like me who do not write for certain reasons xD I love the story!!! and even though it sounded like I was mad at him....which I was InuTaisho is one of my favortes! lol especially when he gets all proud and fatherly lol. keep up the good work please! you definitly deserve a cookie! ^-^...I do hope that Naraku gets whats coming to him though ...very painfully. but thats just me xD

*beats Naraku to a bloody pulp* KNOCK IT OFF YOU PERVERTED LITTLE!!!!!!......o.o My appologies...Couldn't restrain myself any further.... Update! I command it! Or the cheese will come and get you, and you don't want that, now do you? No, I didn't think so. >=P Muwhahaha! Anyway, short chappies are evil! Eeeeeeevvvvvvviiiiiiiiilllllllll I says! ^-^ I wait impatiently for your next update.

Update soon please. Naraku is an evil bastard. Sesshomaru needs to hurry up and rescue him.

This is a very interesting story but it is too sad. I have a suggestion...please don't let Inuyasha become pregnant again by Naraku but instead let Tsukiko develope some sort of power that would save Inuyasha from her 'biological father'. Since she seems to be developing a 'bond' or fascination with Sess, maybe this bond would over power Naraku and once he is dead (hopefully), the love between Sess and Inu would change her to full Inuyoukai. She would look like her two siblings and evenually become ' daddy's little girl' I'm a sucker for happy endings. :) Just a thought!

Judzea

please tell me there will be more? i dnt think it would be fair if there wasnt i have to have more-no i need more this story is amazing it has truly become my favorite fanfic i have to find out wat happens to inuyasha. if u cant tell i luv ur stroy i hope u will continue to add chapters to it.

I love this story! It's wonderful and crazy. Please update soon :)

i love the story i read it all n 1 day, im so tired ive been up since 1 this morning .pleze let inuyasha get out of this situation soon

Wow! this is written pretty well but for a few minor grammer issues that seem to go through every chapter. You might want to read them once more before you put them up.
I like it though. You have written this very well, i lke it even though i am not a big AU fan, at all. Not even remotely.
Keep it up. and if you have a mailing list for updates please put me on it. My e-mail is angelnoyami@hotmail.com
Angel no Yami

I'm sorry if it's not my place to say this, and I do realize that not only is this fiction but fiction about demons in ancient japan, so plausability is out the window already, but... with the level of emotional trauma and psychological scaring you've already put your main character thru, to be captured and victimized yet again, a psychological break with reality is inevitable, and in most cases even if the victim does eventually return from their catatonic state they are almost never completly functional again. Especially in regards to ever having a healthy emotional or sexual relationship. I only mention it because this fandom seems overly fond of the rapefic and I had applauded you for not overly trivializing how debilitating it can be to the victim, and how long term the consequences are when you had used it earlier in the story and I was just wondering how you were going to resolve the fact that if your main character is rescued it will at the very least be several years before he begins to heal, if ever. many do not, even with years of therapy ever become comfortable with intimacy again, after the level of abuse you've described. You mentioned in one of you Author's Notes that you noticed a lack of 'lemons' and wanted to included more but I can't see how it would be logical to do so unless they are more rapes. Or were you going to focus on the secondary couples? Anyway, I'm sorry if I've offended you or overstepped myself, I'm kinda new to fanfiction and I'm not sure of the proprieties.

I've got to say you are the most awesome person alive!!!!! I love your stories so much. You have officially gotten me into sesshomaruXinuyasha fanfics! thank you so much for writing this amazing fanfic it's the best I've read. You deserve a hi five and a hug. Also thanks for updating so soon you got me hooked on this story. It's so good I've bookmarked it WOOT! WOOT! Anyways can't wait till the next chapter I mean whats going to happen to Inuyasha! Oh yeah you got me going there on Sess and Inu cuddling I was expecting a lemon. Darn! oh well seems like theres not going to be a lemon for a while seeing as inuyasha has been taken by Naraku. Tear! oh well the story must go on. Love ~Teddy Bomber*` FIFA 2006 (sorry had to add that I love soccer :p sue me) bye bye! ^-^