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Aack! I'm sooo far behind, it's not funny! You update faster then I can read your chapters. Anyway, I've actually been busy with 'Devils and Demons'. And I can't read you fic at home because my kids keeps asking for things thus interupting my good reading.

Hopefully, I can give a proper review tomorrow, my kids will be with their father. At least that way I can read one chapter.

Nemsis ^_~

wow that so made my day. i can't believe how kick ass that chapter was. as for Naraku I think I'll spare you the mental totures I'm putting him through currently. Probably better for the sanity of the general public anyways. That chapter as I mentioned before was amazing. I can't believe Sesshomaru hasn't rescued him yet and that collar was simply brutal. Poor child, I'm torn half-way between not wanting to feel sympathetic cause she is not a product of Sesshy and Inuyasha and wanting to scoop her up and out of the horrors of Naraku's dungoens. How dare you make me so confuzled. And yet only a truly magnificant peice of writing can do that. Which this is. Oh and be proud I do believe this is the longest fic I have managaed to read chapter wise. Most of the really long ones that I have to catch up on loose me immedaitly but this one is so good that it could never do that so keep up the good work and update soon.

- Incessant_darkness

It's a really great story. Also Tetsuaiga means Steel-Cleaving Fang just to let you and I'm talking about chapter4.

im soooo happy you finally updated...im begining 2 like this dark fic that youve created

yay im so glad ur gonna keep writing(unles u die or become incapacitated of course). i love this fanfic and i cant wait to read the next chapter.

*grins* you updated!! yay!!
i was really looking forwrd to this, and it made my day after a particularly horrendous day at college..neway, again..you really seem to have an awful sadistic streak( but ofcourse, so do i, or i wouldnt still be reading this, lol!), poor poor inuyasha.. i doubt he can take much more!
tsukiko stook up for her mother !or is it father? huh..confusing..right let it be bearer, since you call him that..that was a nic elittle addiction...though i must say the chapter was *short*, but im sure the next chapters will be longer.. *smiles absolutely non threateningly*..
when will sesshy get there? *sniff sniff*, but i have a feeling that its going to take a bit more time..*sigh*...oh well, the only solution is for you to get there faster, so update! hahaha..
ciao!!!

oooohhhhh that was cruel with the dog collar. i mean wow and then it seeped into his skin and whatnot talk about pain and a shot to yuor pride. lol though i liked how you had tsukiko attack naraku and then join her "mother" in her screaming. though it wasn't meant to be a funny scene it was just a little bit on the funny side. I'm glad you updated and how things go well for you at school and cant wait to read the next installment.

Once a gain a very interesting chapter. I look forward to the next. Thank you for the alert by the way. I am not as able to find updates on AFF.net as I would like to be.
I didn't see any issuess in this chapter. So good job. ^_^
Angel no Yami

right, i found this story a few days ago and i thought that instead of leaving a review for every chapter(which really would be more than the total amount of rei views ive given to neone) a nice long review at the end would be better!
I LOVE Your story!!!! 59 chapters is no mean feat and u managed(more than managed actually) to make each and every one of them absolutely addictive, and interesting! u got me hooked from the first chapter onwards and i was more than dissapointed to see that i had reached the end already..
i love your style of writing too, it flows beautifully. plus you succeeded in being true to the characters which is difficult to say the least!
ive been up at night reading this for the past 2 dyas and you've given me a most wonderful alternative to sleep! lol!
i liked how you made little adjustments here and there to introduce more characters that we've known in the series like rin, kagura, kouga(the love story between rin and him is really too adorable!)shippo, and even jakken. i found it interestring that you made rin have a special attachement to inuyasha and not Seshomaru like in the anime.
Naraku ofcourse is as sick and evil as ever. in what language is naraku hell anyway? because it means hell in my language too, and its not japanese!
hmm, i was expecting the pups to be twins and it was a pleasant surprise that they turned out to be triplets! and the fact that you made hte girl naraku's child, added a ncie twist to it.. but poor poor inuyasha! *sniff**** sesshy will save him right?
neway, he better save him soon, i cant stand to see inuyasha like that! at the beggining i really was more a fan of sesshomaru's and now you've made it equal!
naraku is an evil evil hanyou!
so update soon!!!!! i really dont have nething more to say than this, though i was expecting myself too, i am usually a repeat offender when it comes to rambling, lol! hey, byt maybe your story has effectively cured that disease! hahaha!, ya, so what was i saying? right, UPDATE SOON! and may t he force be with you!!! or sesshomaru in this case! *giggles*

~Riddlestar~

Please ignore the following. This is just me venting my anger. Naraku. Naraku naked. Naraku getting his bits chopped off. A maimed and bleeding and naked Naraku watching his bits being thrown in a blender. Start at slow. Push the blender speed up until it hits absolute high [mush inducing power]. Naraku. Naraku being force fed his liqufied parts. And thus ends this wonderful session of maybe a sixth of what Naraku deserves for what he has done.

But seriously I love how balanced this fic is. Most fics are either totally angsty or totally fluffy but this fic has a good blend [hmm. Maybe I shouldn't use the word blend after the previous episode]. Neways I love how wonderful this fic is, specailly sesshomaru's reactions, they're perfect. I can just picture them in my mind. This fic was so good I had to print a couple chapters out to continue reading it when I was forced off my comp cause of a storm. I just couldn't stay away.

Oh and I didn't think you would actually have Naraku rape Inyyasha again. I figured sesshomaru would burst in and hold Naraku's daughter hostage or something in order to save Inuyasha. Not that Sesshomaru would ever hurt his daughter but still.

I knew from the start that some of Inuyasha's pups would have to be Sesshomaru's because when Inuyasha was tired when he was running from Naraku I immediately assumed it was because he was pregnant, weird assumption but that's just how I am. But then I thought there was no way Naraku would have any of his own pups in the litter because technically once someone gets pregnant their body pauses the developement and release of eggs and so even if they have sex again they can't get pregnant again. I guess I forgot to consider that Inuyasha is a male, a demon and in no way held to such rules. It's just I misled myself so it was a huge suprise when I found out that the girl was Naraku's. Made me kinda sad but kinda happy at the same time because it kept the Naraku plotline alive.

So great job with this fic. It really is a masterpeice. It's one of those fics that other fics are judged by. Really cool work. I hope you update soon I'll be checking every day for updates. Keep up the great work and update soon.