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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I love how the Sango and Miroku are so in character! Sango reacted to what happened between them in a way, I believe, Sango actually would. Great job! I hope you continue!
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was GOOD! i wanna know what happens so UPDATE SOON!!!
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good and well written first chapter! I like how you don't have them not admitting their feelings, and I really like the I/K stuff to were they are acting with a little more sense and maturity
M/S wow, now it's out in the open can't wait to read chap 2
M/S wow, now it's out in the open can't wait to read chap 2
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, chap two was GREAT LOL, I don't blame Miroku! Also Loved how you went through his reasoning for all his actions I think it's on of the best explanations I've ever read, it was detailed and made sense to what real human males around his age would think. great job with that
and Chap there.....whoa I wow, he did.......ummm I'm jealous of Sango, I always thought Miroku would be great at "kissing'
put me on your update list and please update soon
and Chap there.....whoa I wow, he did.......ummm I'm jealous of Sango, I always thought Miroku would be great at "kissing'
put me on your update list and please update soon
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OoOoOo... More... More ^_^ It's good so far!
~*~*~*~Mara-san~*~*~*~
~*~*~*~Mara-san~*~*~*~
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMMIT ALL TO HELL! ugh. why,why coudn't he have just lost control,and why couldn't she sumbit to him!!? por que!!!!!!!(why) u are sooooo frikken evil! how could u leave us at a cliffie!!!(ok, just so u know, this isn't a flame,this is just pure frustration) can u please make the next chapter where he saves her life from a demon and the next chapt where she repays him back?
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOAH!! That was totallly hot!!
I can't believe all Miroku had to do to get into bed with her was kiss her!!! What if Shippou or Kirara walked in???
I really loved this chapter!!! So umexpected!!~ First oral sex, and then what's next?? Maybe Sango will give him a hand job?? To be honest, I never actually read the hand job idea. *hint hint*. But whatever. I m sure whatever you come up with will be good!!
I absolutely adored this chapter for obvious reasons!!
Updatesoon please!!
UGH!! I can't wait!!
I can't believe all Miroku had to do to get into bed with her was kiss her!!! What if Shippou or Kirara walked in???
I really loved this chapter!!! So umexpected!!~ First oral sex, and then what's next?? Maybe Sango will give him a hand job?? To be honest, I never actually read the hand job idea. *hint hint*. But whatever. I m sure whatever you come up with will be good!!
I absolutely adored this chapter for obvious reasons!!
Updatesoon please!!
UGH!! I can't wait!!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, i love the last line that she thinks "she was in trouble" LOL! great!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! great chapter! and lol, poor miro, he's left wanting... ;)
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, Rienna-
Another (very) late review from me.
Still, it makes me happy that you portray Miroku and Sango's relationship the way that you do. There's a lot more to Miroku than just groping and harassing women. His thoughts are (mostly) calculated and planned. Which is funny, because I love watching him struggle with his inner demons about his obvious attraction to Sango. To see him deal with it in a way that would have him assist her with a 'wet dream in progress', is an interesting piece of plot.
It was having Inuyasha catch him after the deed was done that made me love this chapter.
(Miroku wank is love.)
Looking forward to the next chapter!
-SkittleSama
Another (very) late review from me.
Still, it makes me happy that you portray Miroku and Sango's relationship the way that you do. There's a lot more to Miroku than just groping and harassing women. His thoughts are (mostly) calculated and planned. Which is funny, because I love watching him struggle with his inner demons about his obvious attraction to Sango. To see him deal with it in a way that would have him assist her with a 'wet dream in progress', is an interesting piece of plot.
It was having Inuyasha catch him after the deed was done that made me love this chapter.
(Miroku wank is love.)
Looking forward to the next chapter!
-SkittleSama