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I feel sad inside for Sango. It seems Miroku is only thinking of what he wants and how he feels......to a certain extent (and in a perverted way) He going to have to shake up or Sango is going ot give me a real beating! I hope she dose slap him! Telling Kagome he was dying so he could get some "fun" time in! For pete's sake just leave everyone was gone all day and he and Sango could have gone for a "walk" and to "talk to more people". But then we are talking about reckless. perveted, horny Miroku..........so you did it perfectly! But some stuff make me wonder. This Miroku must like his kinky stuff he he wants to be hit by Sango! Lol! Cant wait for the next chapter!!

Hey, I'm leaving my email this time ^~

Anyway.. I was really looking forward to this chapter! I was hoping for a bit of smut, but ah well. I still enjoyed it!!! I've sort of said this before, but I just love your portrayal of all the characters. Are you maybe planning on doing an Inuyasha/Kagome after this??? Or any time, for that matter xp I'd love to see one for you. Are you planning on doing anything after this story?

So.. Keep up the great work, and get up that new chapter soon! ^^

this wasn't your greatest chapter, I'll admit that.
Will the next one be a lemon?? Wow, that was really unexpected how Sango didn't try to Attack Miroku. she was just calm. Way too calm though, as if she's hurting inside??
Update soon please!!~

Oooooooh, you know I hate it when you end chapters like this! I can never tell if your going to continue, or if you're leaving the rest to the readers imagination!

This chapter definately felt more InuYash-ey then the last one, and it made me laugh a few times. As always, let me know when (or if) you're going to update, and I'll come running with bells on...Wow, that sounded really fruity. Yeah, I'll just come running, how's that sound to ya?

chap 4- I still really like it! and I loved Kouga part!!!!!!! I really like him and I just thought it as great. I love how you have Miroku think and act Good job

I've read your other fics and I really really love your writing. Inuyasha is one of my favorite animes, and I love this couple!! I really like the exchange between Inuyasha and Miroku in chapter 2... I like how you portrayed Inuyasha. This story is really shaping up nicely so far, I can't wait to see more chapters! +thumbsup+

This is such a great fic! I'm so glad I found it. It's amazing to find at least one decent lemon fic at this site, and here it is. Kudos to you, because you kept them beautifully in character and you wrote amazingly hot limey and lemony scenes without using cliches. This is also very-wellwritten, and I was instantly drawn into it. Great job!

Sorry it took so long for me to finally read this, but I've been busy. Believe it or not, my mother's 50th birthday, Christmas, and New Years are all exactly one week apart from each other, so I've had a lot to do, with precious little time to just sit down and read something.

This chapter was...Okay I guess. The lime was great and all, don't get me wrong here. It just seemed like something that would of happened in a dream sequence rather than real life. Was that what you were going for?

ok, EXCEPT for the part weresango asks mirokou if this is the same kiss, and he says yes, and she says '“Oh. Alright then. So long as it’s the same one.” that is just waaaaaay off, because it is stupid (sorry, this is not a flame, really its not, i dont mean your stupind, or your writting is stupid, cause its not, really, just bear with me) even in a completely pleasure induced stupor, to have that conversation...it just wuoldnt happen. she cant say that, ands then later be angry with him. she is not htat stupid, either, to fall for that. it jsut doesnt work. sorry, thats jsut my opinion. but anyway, like i was saying, exept for that part, i really like your story, and cant wait to see where it is going! cant wait for more!

Lol Sango is in trouble now! If thats all it takes for one sexual act I would hate to think what would (or should I say will??? hehehe) if he were after children! I hope they get the chance to talk though! There so much tention and running away from it isint helping and that goes for both Sango and Miroku! I did like the chapter though. Sweet and cute at the same time as steamy. hahaha. Its hard to be anything but with Miroku! Cant wait for the next chapter!