rate_review Reviews

Oh. I like it! I've read the 5 chapters that you have up and would really like to see more - I LOVE/ADORE Sango and Miroku - and I don't find enough stories where they are the primary focus. You have hit on an interesting story line - and I will be certain to keep reading what you post. Thanks for sharing!

argh! i've been spoiled by FFnet's story/author alerts, so it's taken me till now to hunt up your story again. though it's great to come back to not one but three nice new chapters.

Miroku's seduction of Sango was magnificent. i love how you narrated/described the kiss--it's Sango's first kiss and you really made that point wonderfully. (nothing quite like the first time and all that.) Sango seems to me to be a bit too forgiving, too much of a martyr after Inuyasha and Kagome get back at him for lying to them, but hey, the taijiya seems to be the type to go all out when she falls in love.

this last chapter (the one with "nushi-sama") was fun and light, pretty different from the preceding chapters but a refreshing change. Shippou blurting out about how Miroku might have confused Shima with some other girl he actually DID "join with" was a great tactic! and i especially enjoyed Miroku's rescue of Sango: "you shit! taking my woman!" hee hee!

please be so kind as to put me on your e-mail list for updates! ^.^

Wew, a spin-off of episode 161 - very impressive how you've connected it with your plot. This fic has really caught my attention. I eagerly await the next chapter.

Wow, sorry it took me so long!. I loved when Inuyasha smacked the fish demon LOL,

ANd how Miroku showed he cared when the demon had Sango

And the end where Sango talks about her complex feelings......well I love it!

Loved the whole thing really, seriously. Good job

You just HAD to be one of the good authors who focused on the plot!!!!
Ugh!!! no sex scenes??? Aww... i mstarting to miss those!! Did you get this chapter off of an Inuyasha episode??? because this chapter seemed kinda familar.....
ok-ish chapter....
but I hope the next few would be full of lemons!!!

A few things:

1) God, I love Shipou.

2) How come 'nushi-sama' wasn't capitalized except when it was the begining of a sentence?

3) Can you tell me what 'dono' actually means? The only times I've seen it outside of fan-fiction are in my Peacemaker Kurogane and Rurouni Kenshin mnagas, and in those, it said that it was a term used between samurai of same or similar rank. But everytime I see it in fan fiction, it's usually used to refer to women, and usually in the context of Ms. or Ma'am.

Very nice, though you did skip a bit of the action. That's okay, though. It would probably take like three chapters to write the whole thing in its entirity. n.n I love your story. Very hot and very well done. You handle the characters well. And for the record, they DID animate this part of the manga. Episode 161. I have it fansubbed!

Rabid Fan Girls of the world unite! Inu-Yasha is no longer on 5 days a week... Tear down the walls! Steal all the chairs! Kidnap Adult Swim's toy bunny whiskers! We shall have vengance. Oh sorry. Later!

ohh!! so sad!!! :( ... but good chapter! she's totally right... damn miroku, you're such an ass! lol... but he totally loves her... but how will he prove that to her?

WOOOOOOOOOW thatwas GOOOD i wannaknow what happens update update update!! keep up the good work!

recreational eh? lol! can't wait till the next chapter!!