rate_review Reviews

Wow. I hadn't expected as good a story as this to pop up on this site. It's hard to find a real gem here, but THIS IS ONE. I don't think I've heard quite this characterization of Miroku before. I've seen the "misunderstood guy" angle before, you know, the "it's all just an act to protect myself from emotional pain" and the "he's just a perverted asshole" and a few others that are all pretty much to the extreme-- he's either a saint or a jerk. Yours is interesting in that he's neither. Okay, maybe more jerk than saint, hehe, but at least he's being honest about it. Just the way he thinks about Sango, the pros and cons of being hers, makes him feel real. Well-rounded and believable.
And the last thing about why Sango feels like she can't be with him while those other girls can risk it because they have something to fall back on is a pretty good point. Keep writing.

Your story is really good so far, there is actually a plot going on. Although, I'm trying to figure out what's going on with Kagome and Inuyasha right now....hmmm. I guess I'll have to wait till later^^ Ja ne till then.

I was very impressed by your story and feel that although it may be a different approach to understanding Miroku and Sango's dilemma, their motives and thoughts are still very believable. Your writing is very well done and the plot seems intriguing. I look forward to the next chapter and seeing where this stories leads.

I love reading this!This has one of the best fic i have ever read. Please update soon

I really enjoyed reading this. It's nice (and rare) to find a good Miroku/Sango fic like this one that keeps everyone in character. I think you're doing a wonderful job with Miroku, his personality is strong and believable. Sango's hesitancy combined with eagerness is dead-on too. And the smut is WONDERFUL too! Good job!!

Wheez

I love it! Such quality work here, and I've recommended it to others. You do the Miroku/Sango canon pairing so much justice. Excellent work.

This is really, really good. I love the job you're doing on the characterization, and the fact that you're extrapolating off a specific incident from the manga delights me! I love stories with plot, and a lemon with plot is amazing! Keep up the great work!

What an awesome fic! You are a good writer, keep up the great work! And update soon... what a cliffy you left me with ;)

^_^x This is a good story. I can't believe that little twurp lied about something like that. And worst of all Miroku not saying anything! *sigh* He's such a perv. But Sango should definatly give him a chance. I mean giving up on the person you love is hard and just because he has a bad track record doesn't mean he'll be all that bad. ^_^ Please continue this story! I really like it!

i like it. keep up the work