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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excelent i enjoyed it very much
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoa. that's just so deep, i actually felt that moment at the end. it was very touching. it's amazing how you managed to turn mirokou upside down like that after all preconceptions he had. please continue!
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what a lovely Miroku and Sango romance! Man, I love them as a couple, just so fun. I am enjoying this so much. I can't wait to read more. The way it has ended so far was a great, believale change in Miroku's thinking. Thank you for that!
I thought it was well written, and the characterization of Miroku is wonderful, so easy to see in one's head. The action sequences were very easy to figure out, without awkward phrasing or scenes that were difficult to visualize. And the lemons, woo hoo! The word choice was lovely and hot and a bit sweet, and what struck me about them was the pacing. The flow for the love scenes was just so smooth and at just the right rythm, it was really noticeable and made an impact.
And the bits of humor, like Miroku sending Kagome off to find Mushin, were great and definitely added that little it of 'up' when everything was becoming more serious and/or sad. Thanks so much for writing this!!
I thought it was well written, and the characterization of Miroku is wonderful, so easy to see in one's head. The action sequences were very easy to figure out, without awkward phrasing or scenes that were difficult to visualize. And the lemons, woo hoo! The word choice was lovely and hot and a bit sweet, and what struck me about them was the pacing. The flow for the love scenes was just so smooth and at just the right rythm, it was really noticeable and made an impact.
And the bits of humor, like Miroku sending Kagome off to find Mushin, were great and definitely added that little it of 'up' when everything was becoming more serious and/or sad. Thanks so much for writing this!!
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!! Sango stunned him for real!!! LOL! I loved this chapter! Lemony goodness. When a woman is tired, she is tired...and just like a man, he finally realizes that he really doesn't like a certain situation. Your story is excellent!!!
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay the return of the you! And you come bearing a spectacular chapter! Poor Miroku getting the letter but not the spirit of what he was going for... I eagerly await the next installment!
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was just looking at this maybe a week ago and wondering where you were. xD Good to hear you're back, thanks for the email!
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I went back and re-read the other chapters before reading 6 - Outstanding! I guess even Miroku misunderstands himself.... I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great one. I like how this lemon was so classy. It actually served a purpose, instead of being mindless smut.
I'll get to your other work tomorrow. Right now, I've got a few Death Note eps to watch.
I'll get to your other work tomorrow. Right now, I've got a few Death Note eps to watch.
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED YOUR STORY!!! I like how u included the episode in your fic. It was great. Update soon! Sango really sounds like she's tired of Miroku's shit! LOL! But they still are my favorite couple! ^_^
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*gawk**gasp* finish the damn story already!!! i wanna finish reading it*says in a sad tone*