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for A Rickety Bridge

by stetsuntam

person Sadie
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think my favorite line in that whole story was the last one ! hahahaha! You did an awsome job and I cant wait for the next chapter! Hopefully Sango and miroku will be able to work it out for there most needed peace. And Miroku didnt consider that even if he dose make her his he can still grope her! hehehe! she'll still hit him but he'll know she likes it!lol.
person drake220
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what an ending! Bravo!!! Update again! I love this! It's hot and sexy but with some great characterization! excellent work
person chibi_sanoku105
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo HOT!!
*blush* I Can't believe Miroku took advantage of her in her sleep!! I mean, he actually got her to orgasm??? LOL! That's so typical that Inuyasha caught him in the act!! Thank god Shippou didn't wake up!! ~ I can't believe you made Miroku be one of those guys who fucked girls at 14!! How Could you??~ But I totally loved what he did at the end of the chapter!! ^-^

Great chapter
update soon please!!~
person Sadie
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!!! Please dotn leave me on a cliff hanger like that!! I have to know what happens!!! I have to you hear me!!!!!! I Love MirokuxSango!!! Why do that right when it was at its best why!! Meanie!! hahaha just kidding. But I cant wait for the next chapter! you can never realy ahve to many Miroku and Sango fan-fics or moments!
person David
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's me. Just read the first chapter. This looks like it could be another winner. Be careful though. You said that you were planing to make this a long story, but the sumary and the way the first chapter read, it reminded me of a bunch of one shots or two chapter fics where they just fuck and every thing is all better. I'm interested in how you plan on working this one. Let me know when you update.
person chibi_sanoku105
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! This is so funny!! Although I would really love to read this if it was an AU (Alternate Universe)!!
SOOOO CUTE!! AWW....Sango misses being groped!! Thats sooo sweet!!
Have you posted this story on another site before?? I swear I read this!! It sounds really familar!!
Anywho
update soon please!!~~