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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
would love to read the rest of the story it is very good and entertaining hope you continue soon
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love ths fic, along with your others. If you really feel you need a beta or something, I'll volunteer. Don't see why though, these are wonderful as is. ^^
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poetess, I'll be honest. I don't see much that I'd encourage you to change. Perhaps a bit more description or inside glimpses within Yusuke's mind. You've worked beautifully on character development. Kagome is slowly healing. Wounds like that don't heal super sonic speed.
If you want to talk about this, I'm more than willing to chat about it and help you develop things along a bit faster. I'm an English major and a writer here on AFF.
If you want to talk about this, I'm more than willing to chat about it and help you develop things along a bit faster. I'm an English major and a writer here on AFF.
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! Everything is so perfect in it (well accept Inuyasha, the bastard) I can't wait until the next chapter... please tell me there will be a next chapter, I've fallen madly in love with this fic and it would break my heart for it to end before the lemons... I mean... well... okay maybe I'm a female Miroku but that's perfectly fine with me!!
Until next time,
~Mari-chan~
Until next time,
~Mari-chan~
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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way that you have constructed this piece of work. I can't wait to see how the plot thickens and of course the nit 'n griddy.
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you continue with this story, it's not a pairing that a reader comes across often. I like that you made all three volnerable and emotionally dependant on each other for healing instead of just a heart broken Kagome using stronger male influences as an easy fix for her life. It's nice to read a story that doesn't go kagome meets guy, has sex with guy, happily ever after the end.
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story! Your plot is fantastic, and I love the way you've expressed character's personalities. I can't wait until your next chapter comes out! I just read all 17 chapters in a row! Keep up the great work!
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Too tired for a proper review, but I just sat up half the night reading this, and wanted to say that I enjoyed it and can't wait for more!
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
inu seems lyka baka in this is there going to be kikyo bashin and inu i love inu but its fun if he gets bashed over what he did
that was soo sad im lovin this fic
Update soon
that was soo sad im lovin this fic
Update soon