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Please update soon!

I liked your story very much, especially with the crossovers well done, BUT when will you updating it ? I thought that, after such a very good first lemon, we would read some others with Youko and Sesshomaru in follow…
So I’m waiting yet and yet. Thank you for the pleasure to read you !

A french mother and reader,
Bonne année et bonne santé,

Merely Truth

this is awesome!!! please update soon!! thank you!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Whenever I need a good Hiei/Kagome fix, I re-read this story. *Heavy sigh* But, it's been a while since you've added to it. You've got SO MANY great stories in progress, and I am a true, devoted fan. Upon my umpteenth reading of this one, I just had to share some thoughts and hopes. This is the ultimate Hiei/Kagome relationship. You built it up so well, it's so well-written, it's completely believable and heartfelt. And while I would feel very sorry for Kurama and Sesshoumaru to miss out, (seriously -- she's the only one I can picture with them, too), I don't see the same kind of bond and love between them. And since she and Hiei have already expressed/acted upon their feelings for each other, I think he's left the others in the dust. Will he get a chance to cement their relationship before the others intrude? How would a multi-partnering work with 2 from her time and 1 in the past? Let's talk Inu. I thought he was necessary to defeat Naraku. I'm all for some good Inu bashing because he's such a baka, but I guess I didn't expect him to actually get his stupid butt killed. Could he have been under the influence of someone else? (Naraku? Kikyou?) What will be their reaction to this development? The whole group still has to encounter Kouga for his shards, right? And fight Naraku? (And let Hiei have more great lemony scenes with Kagome!) I am happy whenever you update any of your works, but this one is super-special to me. I hope you get a chance to enthrall me some more with it soon!

This is such a good fic! I think this one and "Circle of Souls" are my favorites. Please don't give up on them. I wonder if there will be any saving InuYasha after all that. Hiei wants his head on a stick, but I'm sure Kagome's kind nature will prevail. Now where does Sesshomaru fit inot all of this? Another love interest, perhaps? I think this is the first time I've read of Shippou transforming into another form. I like the idea of him being strong enough to protect Kagome. Wonderful fic.

i love it! great story! hope to read more of it soon!

OH I really love your story so far and hope that you update it soon. Keep me posted if you can.

p.s. that is the first story i have read where shippo takes on an animal form... i loved it... (trust me i have read alot of stories he he)

Always,
fluffysNekogirl

i like the way the story is progressing please update soon

Ummm. wow. an excellant piece, but not and easy one to read in some places. (i.e. Inuyasha's attack) Those scenes are never easy, but you did a really nice job dealing with it and addressing some of the potential results and reactions from the whole event. The relationship between Hiei and Kagome is developing at a good pace. There also seems to be potential from Kurama's area, but maybe some of that is wishful thinking. Anyways keep writing and enjoying it. [I find myself developing a need for crossover fixes after what I have read.]