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for New Story (Destined To the Stars)

by KuraiTenshi

person CelesPrye
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww =) I like I like! =D plz keep up the story
person labelle
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what ever the writer wishes to do is fine by me but a word of caution if i may... try not to bog down the story too much with vast explinations of things that are not important to the story line it may loose some readers
person Deborah L.
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey. . .I like this story -- it's got a lot of potential. . .please update it soon! And put more of the science into it -- I'm a geek and I appreciate learning anything new. Good job!
person bloodyrose66
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so creative! I love it and I can't wait to read more. Please update soon. I'll be waiting (OMG, that sounded so...so stalkerish!) lol. Anyway, keep up the great work! Your writing is splendid! Meow! (*ahem* Sorry. I had an urge to say that. I'm very hyper right now) Well, I look forward to reading more. ^__^
Love,
bloodyrose66
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter and I think that even though I don't normally read stories of this genre, this story definately ranks high on my favorites list. Hope you update soon.
person Tsuki
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nya, the story is funny.You should definetly keep updating it!
person Tsuki
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
humm for the title... Love through the stars..? euhh star queen? euhh Amore attraverso le stelle (this means the same as Love through the stars only that I translated to italian... or Amor como no otro (A Love like no other), eeuhhh Mon etoile or Mia Stelle (My star) euhh darn I better stop I can't find a good title..sorry and I'll just keep up giving you foreign words.. --;
person Phoenix
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One word: HILARIOUS! But one question: Where is the story going to go? Do they eventually get together and do it or what? This is AFF after all. Anyway, regardless if this turns into a lemon or not; still a great plot so far. Keep it up!

I think you should call it "Space Case", but that's just me. I think that the story needs to develop further before you can really come up with something good. It's just my method.
person sassy
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ya I got a name for you Genius and Jackasse.
person .
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.o

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