rate_review Reviews

I think you should put the explanations in so people don't get lost. maybe you can put a simple explanation in a authors note at the bottom of the page for people who don't know science very well. I love science so I would really like to have the full explanation. if u have the time could you e-mail me when you update.

hi i just have to say i love this story and i myself am very interested in astronomy and the sciences. all of your explanations are really great and the way the story is coming out is superb. the title of the story suits it well and well for the name of the chapters i would get back to you on that. im not the greatest writer but i do try and well if anything i will keep previewing this story to see if i get any ideas for chapter names. hope you update soon! ja ne!

P.S. if u know much about naruto how about you give me a couple of pointers on how to continue my story called A Night Full of Unexpected Dreams. ive tried my best in writing it and its gone well but ur story is very good and maybe u can help me out a bit. thnx bye and keep up the amazing work!!!

WOOT! TWO CHAPTERS TOMMORROW!? YOU BETTER KEEP CHU PROMISE! >.> Weeeeee! I love your story and its only been 2 chapters XD. Keep it up, matey!

what happened to ch3?

that was definately different. i can't wait for more please update again soon.

this is so unique i love it so much

OMG!!!! I lvoe this! And finally someone makes the virign reaction realistically complete! lol,. you always finds those fics where she is overcome by her driving lust and the (previously alien but still comforting) growling of a predator hanging over her! Oh, FIe! I can not resist!!! ...er yeah. lol. I am very ahppy with you, and I woudl offer huggles but I don't think you would appreciate it. lool, so kudos to you and RockON!!!! I am anticipating your next chapter and adore the things you put in this! I don't care about the details you put in, if you feel comfrotable with htem rock on, and enjoy yourself! As longas you are happy with your story and avoid posting mistakes and have trouble writing it for everyone esle then I will try to review every chappie you put up. (it also helps that I am not a fan of Inu and love this pairing!)

i like your story... however i thought you ought to know that you seem to be missin chapter three....

Great chapter, update soon please and bring that Lemon soon :p lol great chapter(again)

I would have to say give an overview. As awesome as astronomy is, I can't see a full on explanation not taking a huge amount of time away from the story, but if you can pull it off I say go for it.