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Can't wait to read more. Please update as soon as you can.

Another gem from the master.

I love your works & i LOVE how you DESTROY
that whole 'sit' shit. God, how I hate that.
It makes me cringe when she does it & when
I write I don't give him one. When I do it's
either for his protection or cruelty coming from
someone other than Kagome. She loves him, so
why hurt him?

Great start, can't wait for more!

Hi there!

I think this chapy was kind of cute, humorous and sad all at once. Although I think that Inuyasha would want to keep the rosary, I also think that he wouldn't mind the "no more sits" part. You know, it was a bit scary at first, seeing Kagome in Inu's place. But you got your point across. And it is rare. People tend to just make the characters do things without giving them a reason. Even if there happens to be a bit of OOC-ness, when there is a good reason, it's OK. And I also don't really think that whenever Inu ang Kag confess their feelings, the next thing for them will be to jump straight to bed. So if you can write it whitout making this mistake (and the also classical "and what about Kikyou - oh, I love you now, she's just a friend") then It'll be a wonderfull story! Please, just go on as you started.
It's not that important to have a lemon in the third chappy. But when there is a lemon, than make it good, and worth waiting for!

Hope you don't think I was trying to offend you in any ways. I really like the first ch. and I'm looking forward to reading more!

This was fun!
I really enjoyed having Kagome worry about her treatment of Inuyasha.
Will you be posting more soon?

Wow! I really love this story. It's was interesting to read about Kagome living what Inuyasha has been through. You are right, dreams tend to exaggerate things and make you feel guiltier that’s why I liked the way you wrote the story because we can get the concept that Kagome feels very bad of how she’s been treating Inuyasha and has decided to amend to wrong. Keep up with the good job and please update as soon as you can. I’m really looking forward in reading more chapters.

So far, I love it. Nice to see somebody can see the cruelty of that 'leash' for what it is. The nightmare was accurate but, as you said, more extreme. Writing style is very nice too. Looking forward to next chapters.

Oh, and the A/N on flaming was great. Hilarious, too.

That sounds like a great story! Can't wait for the next chapter and the lemon :D

Wow--- that completely changed my perspective of Kagome...

Oh... Shit... And to think I kinda liked the rosary...forget that...

Niiiice! That shows ya how doing something bad comes right back to ya! So, any new fics you need proofreading yet?