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Hate to point it out to 'dangersque' but Kouga's actually not two-timing anyone. Ayame is the product of the anime; she's a non-canon/manga character that wasn't created by Takahashi-sensei. In fact, he's (Kouga) has been pretty honest and upfront concerning his intentions with Kagome. If anyone's been misleading (not intentionally) or two-timing, it's definitely been Inuyasha.

dont worry about some trivial punctuation error, and get up a new chapter!! please.

I really like this fic-it makes me laugh! HAHHAHA

I don't know... That last chapter kind of left a bad taste in my mouth. Don't get me wrong, I'm no Shippo fan, but I just can't see him doing something that harsh. He's certainly annoying, and snotty, and maybe even a little malicious, but I doubt he'd ever be that cruel. Dropping an anvil on Inuyasha's head, I can see him doing. Impersonating Inuyasha's dead mother, not so much (He's not Sesshoumaru after all). He's not that evil, and I doubt he ever would be, even with the shitty job Kagome and the others do in setting his boundries.

It's not enough to turn me off the story, I just hated the second chapter. I can't wait until you do a Kouga chapter though, someone needs to write something that calls him out on his shit, what with the village slaughtering, and kidnapping, and (unlike Inuyasha) actual two-timing, his bullshit reason for going after Naraku, and his use of mystical steroids and such. He's not harmless, and I'll be very disappointed if you write him as such.

This is to the reviewer that talks about Inuyasha not mastering his sword yet.... the attack you are talking about is one that is new and not orginally part of the "fang" his father had created. So is the "red Tetsusiaga" and the attack with the "diamond shards" those were not part of the original design but keep in mind that not all of us have read the manga and only know what has happened in the anime so they don't know about the attack that absorbs youkai power... the "dragon scale" thingy. So as far as they are concerned Inuaysha has mastered Tetsusaiga. Anyway I like the story please update soon

Hi there! Interesting perspective you're working there. Of course Kagome was never really cruel or unfair like the first chapter made her out to be. It's just the way the people who hate her character see her as. Yes, the same people go and worship Kikyo...when SHE'S the cold bitter ¨@¨&!. LOL. Sorry...got a little carried away there.

Anyway, I wanted to let you know that I LOVED the little blurb you had at the beginning 'the difference between a critical review and a flame'. I have featured it on my website http://groups.msn.com/KikyoHaters/diaryofangst.msnw?action=get_message&mview=0&ID_Message=2585 , giving you FULL props and a link to this story of course. If you do not wish to have your stuff on my site....just let me know and I will remove it, kay?

Keep up the good work!

Well I think this is a pretty good story. I do think maybe Kagome might have spanked Shippou a bit too much but then agian that was a very cruel thing he did. All of them know what it is like to loose a parent. Inuyasha, Sango, Miroku and Shippou have all lost both their parents and while I don't know if Kagome's dad died he doesn't live with them nor do you ever see or hear of him so I am assuming he either left or died either way she lost him. So they all know how cruel that joke was and while spanking with the brush might have been a bit harsh we have to remember that Shippou is not human and is stronger then a human child that age so spanking open handed might not have had the effect it did with the brush. I would suggest some other type of punishment in the future. The time out was good but also taking away a privilage like his crayons, sleeping next to Kagome, not giving him candy things like that. Also maybe a day of having to do what one of the others say as long as it is within reason. Inuyasha has a tentencay (sp?) to hit first so I think some other types of punishment would be good not just for Shippou but for Inuyasha as well it would help him with his control. He did great when Shippou did that joke I really proud that he didn't loose his temper. And as far as him watching well that just added to Shippou's punishment having known that someone saw him getting his behind spanked. Just my opinion don't let others stop you from writing I think you are doing good. Please update soon.... with a new chapter.

I like where your going with this story. I have to say I don't care wheather he has the beads or not. It depends on the author's story. Sometimes the beads come in handy, like in episodes where it actually saved his life, but, than on other episodes, Kagome just abused it's power. So, depending on the content of the fanfic, something as small as the beads could mean a big thing. Another thing I noticed was that Inuyasha followed Kikyo without the use of beads. So, I wondered why couldn't Kagome? I'm looking forward to reading chapter three and the other chapters to follow.

I'm not sure which I liked better - the fact that Kagome finally saw what she was doing to InuYasha on a regular basis (nightmares do intend to exaggerate things, but lets face it - Kagome uses that rosary every time she is pissed to get even with InuYasha), or the fact that the annoying kit finally got what was coming to him (his mouth has actually created some of the problems between them in both the anime and manga). Anyway, I'm really enjoying it so far and am curious to see where it goes.

This is too cute!
Damn time that Shippo get his! XD
Nicely done, please continue to update. <3