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Interesting story I loved that kagome realized from her nightmare the pain and suffering she was putting Inuyasha through and Shippo well he deseved what he got the little brat he is a spoiled immature little sesshomaru want to be and she should have whipped him till he couldn't sit for a month. Well anyway loved the story very well written and detail oriented so many stories are not but this one is a fantastic read I give four stars and two thumbs up you rule.

Well I REALLY Liked seeing Kagome give shippo some of his own back.

And I have very... Mixed feelings on the rosary.


On one hand I DO think its neccessary since inuyasha is in many ways an overgrown child.

an overgrown child with little healthy socialization.

an overgrown child with little healthy socialization, AND Power that could let him smash everyone in sight, in the middle of a tantrum (whiich he does throw basicly )

Even so... I think she SERIOUSLY Overuses the beads.

I could say that in a lot of the cases she uses them just because he said something she didnt like , shes really just trying to teach him to be more polite, because his mother wasnt around to teach him that.

But if that was the case I dont think she'd have used 12 repetions of the incantation, then just sighed in disgust without even offering him a better way to handle things.

I thought shippo was a little OOC I dont think he's THAT spiteful... but he really think that if Inuyasha gets Osurawrid for responding to shippo's insults, then shippo should AT LEAST get a time out for insulting inuyasha in the first place, but he's always hugged and told its all right.

sorry know this was a long review just wanted you to know my feelings are mixed.

That actually wasn't a bad plan. Both from a character standpoint and from an actual plan standpoint. Simple enough for a child to think of, yet would probably work if he went through with it. I think you made the right choice in having Shippo decide not to do it, even if it was a bit soon for my taste. I hope that wasn't the ending to the story, although it did feel like an ending.

Awesome story so far. I like the new Kagome and the small changes in Inuyasha's personality due to the beads being taken off. Keep up the good work and please update soon.

I'm glad I'm not the only one who sees the potential for Shippou to be a totally spoiled rotten brat. There are times he deliberatly baits InuYasha and runs to Kagome for her to sit him. And he's usually the first to make some comment where Kikyou is involved (he does it in the manga too). And you are right, nightmares tend to distort things and twist them (which why they are nightmare and not dreams). Anyway, I'm enjoying this fic very much and look forward to the next chapter.

Sesshoumaru in training's kind of over doing it. If anything he's a Loony Tune in training, albeit an annoying Looney Tune you want to see get eaten like Tweety Bird or the Road Runner...
I can't wait for the Kouga chapter, if you think about it, even without the Kagome junk, Inuyasha has a very good reason to hate him that nobody ever touches on: Kouga killed off an entire village that Inuyasha had to bury. That's gotta rankle him a bit, especially since he was pinned to a tree and got the rosary put on him and nothing he did approaches that, while Kouga had nothing bad happen to him as a result of his actiona at all.

Bill the Surly 2006-01-24 id # 2035616946
So, for you male "justice" is turning the woman you love into a lobotomized wife-slave. I feel sorry for your future wife and daughters.


Can someone point out how Kagome has become a lobotomized wife-slave? I can't seem to recall where I wrote that.

The following is an e-mail I planned to send to Mr. Surly, before I realized he left no address.

Bill, I plan to delete any and all communications from you in the future. You obviously have nothing of value to contribute. This site is for adults, with the implied understanding that writers and reviewers will act like adults. That means treating people with respect. You have proven, on this and other occasions, that you are not mature enough to handle such a responsibility. I can only hope that someday you will mature and learn basic manners and curtisy. Then I will be happy to hear your thoughts on my writtings.

Story is good but trust me shippo isn't like that. He merely teases Inuyasha. Like siblings would do. Something like that a is WAY too mean for him. He really cares about Inuyasha and would most certainly know how much that would hurt him. Anyway I'm not asking you to change the story but jsut saying that if thats how you see shippo you're not looking deep enough into his character. Anyway keep going you're a pretty good writer considering how much you write and how often.

Looks like Shippo needs another spanking with his bad ass little attitude. Look forward until your next chapter.

Chanda

Its very well written (but just to note: until has only one "L") and offers a refreshing perspective that falls against the norm. I don't agree with spanking though, and certainly not with an object. Spanking only leads to hurt feelings and resentment, sometimes even the fear of a parent, but it does put a child in line I guess.

I can see Kagome waking up one day and realizing the fact that many of her actions were cruel and I'm glad she did. As someone else suggested it would be interesting to see what would happen if Inuyasha lost control and Kagome didn't have the subduing charm to aid her. Though, I think she's proven that she doesn't really need it :) I don't necessarily agree that a lemon is needed in this particular situation because I don't see this story going in that direction, its more about morality. I'm interested to see where you take this work.

Good job:)