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Oh my God! This is such a good story! I love this story! Its so perfect!

A prize piece for any wandering reader in search of an enchanting outlet from our world, if ever a fan fiction spurned the conventional barriers of the usual M/M variety in favor of a strong plot and enthralling setting this would be it. Your lush yet vague details and descriptions have the capability of transporting your readers to a whole new universe filled to the brink with dark mysteries of the past and the unattainable foresight of the future, mixed with the all too alluring sexual tension of our favorite characters and their never ending spats.X3

-Rin

GODDAMIT WOMAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (or guy don't know what gender the author is) UPDATE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!!!!!!!!!!! (or buddha whatever your religion is) LIKE I'VE SAID IN THE PAST (not to you but to some authors I've reviewed to probably about 3 and I've been reading fanfiction for a year now and its very hard to please me in fanfiction) UPDATE FOR PETE'S SAKE!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE IT WHEN AUTHORS HAVE A WONDERFUL, FANTASTIC, EXCITING STORY GOING AND THEY JUST SIT ON THERE ASSES AND NOT UPDATE IN LIKE A CENTURY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( this in not a flame but sort of like a plea if you can even call it that) SO UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!-
GP101

I am so glad that this story is continuing. It's a good storyline and very imaginative; where'd you come up with it? Can't wait for the next update.

D_

This is a cool story. I think I started reading it on a different sight, and I was surprised to find it here. It wasn't complete there either, so I hope you're going to be updating this sometime soon, cause it seems to be a really good story so far.

Great update. You did a great job detailing Inuyasha's life, it really shows how he came to be the type of person he is and what he has had to suffer through. Kinda pissed at Kouga for shooting him but I'm sure they will learn to live with each other. Keep it up.

D_

I'm so glad you decided to continue this. I read it on SNS, and when it went on hiatus, I was hoping that you would continue the story. Your character development is flawless, and your writing style is simply wonderful. I'm enjoying the story very much and will continue to keep an eye out for updates.

~Kai

ohhh! he destroyed his doll! inu you ass! i think he should fix it :( cause yeah, i'd shoot him too. haha... anyhow, great story! damn! more chapters!

I have been waiting for the fourth chapter to this story! Yes! I can read it now! -dashes off to do so- (btw, I really liked this story and looked for it elsewhere after reading it at Cosmic Castaway's site. Thank you!)

Excellent imagery in the scene with Inu in the tomb. That alone is enough to send anyone into the arms of madness. Hopefully this will only send him into the arms of Kouga.

Caitriona