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for The Coffee Shop Dating Service

by SilverPhoenix21

person whatever
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello, i like your story great beginning.Well keep up the good work !!UPDATE A.S.A.P!!!

BYE 4 NOW,
JESSICA
person wowwee
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is so great!!! continue continue continue!!!
a question, however, if kagome's the poor student living by working part time and going to classes (gee, doesn't that sounds familiar...), how come she can afford to be in the same building as Inuyasha the millionaire boy?
No Jakotsu? But he is so much fun! ^_^
person pixie1525
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! very interesting defintaly liking the bikes!!!! great writing and setting up the story... keep going sounds good!
person luckyducky7too
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My brain is really slow today. I didn't realize Kagome was talking to Inuyasha's dad until you mentioned how old he was. Wake up brain! Anyways, I think this is a great start for your story, but might want to check on your grammer a bit. Please update soon.
person Jeszie
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It's really great so far! I like nice old Mr. Taisho! He's the coolest! lol I wish my neighbor was as hot as Inuyasha... I'd walk over there and knock on the door in the middle of the night ALL THE TIME! :D
person fan of kagome
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
And i really do.
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continue this story.

nothing an I MEAN NOTHING IS WRONG WIT IT

TTFN;
megan