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for The Coffee Shop Dating Service

by SilverPhoenix21

person bob
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this stry keep it up and its hilarious
person Jeszie
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter again! You are a pretty good writer and I enjoy reading it, but I will add that I think someone *cough cough* was lacking in the re-reading their work department! :D lol no um.... I'm sure you've already been told this, or seen it yourself, but there are a few words that are misplaced.... it's not bad enough to ruin the flow of the chapter, in fact the words that were placed were close enough to the words that should have been there, that I could figure it out as I went through. But anyway... just wanted to fill you in on that.... but again. I loved the chapter and I really loved that stuff between Inu/Kag at the end! It was priceless and oh-so-funny! It killed I swear! :D
person Kagss
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey i really think this one can be a very good story!!! I like how you're starting it, and believe me it's sure enterteining... looking forward for your updates.. keep going!!!
person fan of kagome
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for giv'en me my props:)
Agien perfectc hapter
plezzzzzzzzzzzz
continue updating
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!

P.S.: ireally like how ur wrting this story
i dont think u should listen to those meanys
u shouldI think that u should have kagome and
her friends go to a really cool club.
And that miroku should learn about this
and taks Inuyasha there and they start to flirt with the girls;)

TTFN;
megan
person Rachie
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this is gonna be good! I cant wait for the next update!
person cyn
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it great start.
can't wait for the next chapter.
person inuyashasmate
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats good update soon!!!

thanks
Inuyashas Mate
person InuyashaAndMe4ever
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!I LOVE THIS STORY...
person anon
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg your story is good i like it!!
please update
person peopledontunderstand
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG UPDATE!!!!