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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg...where has this story been my entire life?!?!?!? It's amazing and has me hooked form Chapter 1!!!! Keep up the awesome job!!!!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AND you're a Final Fantasy X-2 fan?!?!? *SQUEALS!!!!!* You ROCK SO HARD!!!!!! lol, just a little author admiration! Great job!
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story has really caught my interest and is well written. I like the mysteriousness about what happened to Kagome in the past, and the way Sesshoumaru is so mischevious when it comes to Rin. I've enjoyed what I've read so far, and I hope that there will be more chapters to come!
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED... PLEASEEEE.. I CANT WAIT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN... !!!
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Plxz update soon but why are there people after kagome?
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait for the next chap
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its REALLY good i cant wait for the next chapter
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow i can,t wait to read the next chapters. up date soon! love ya! Bye!!
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is very good and very well written!! I am enjoying it very much!! Hmmmmm I wonder what happened in Kagome's past!! I hope the update is soon!!
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Ash,
I don't know if I reviewed the first time I read your story or not, but I'm reviewing now anyway.
You have a really good plot line and enough premise to keep it interesting. Your grammar and spelling is decent too, even though a beta reader or a close word check would not be remise. ..they aren't misspelled, some words are just left out and some are the wrong word. It's not enough to turn away a reader looking for good fiction though. I know, I've closed several windows before finishing the first chapter if it wasn't well written.
Keep up the good work, and I look forward to your next chapter!
Kat
I don't know if I reviewed the first time I read your story or not, but I'm reviewing now anyway.
You have a really good plot line and enough premise to keep it interesting. Your grammar and spelling is decent too, even though a beta reader or a close word check would not be remise. ..they aren't misspelled, some words are just left out and some are the wrong word. It's not enough to turn away a reader looking for good fiction though. I know, I've closed several windows before finishing the first chapter if it wasn't well written.
Keep up the good work, and I look forward to your next chapter!
Kat