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by sess88

person Geisha
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Fic! WOW Inu and Rin... I never thought Rin would be the wild type. Hahaha it qwas great. Can't wait for more. Well see ya!
person shooky
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the intensity you put into such a short amount of words. I happen to be just like you only I think you should put more emphasis on how much he (whoever the male is) is pleasuring the girl because you have to remember that the female is the one that has to take a hard dick into their pussy, so I think they deserve a little pleasure, more so than a male does.
person dede
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER
person Tsadoriko
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!Why would you stop that.I'll be happy if you write some more.JA-NE'
person PoutyKitten
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Meow! This fic of yours is very cute. Rin and Sesshomaru are my favorite pairings on the well-known show. Purrrlezz, update very soon. Much love to ya and keep up the good work! See ya later. ~gives kitty smile~
person hi
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great
person Akasha
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The plot builds...don't leave us lowly readers waiting too long!
person sphinx
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
such a waste tat rin's first time has been taken by inu and in a car sigh... update soon1
person Ren
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I don't like Inu fucking Rin, but it's okay I guess, because Sesshoumaru will come into play! ^_^ Keep up your wonderful workline! ^_^ Update again sometime soon ne! ^_^
person kyle
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story plz update soon