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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O DAMN!
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay. Lube is essential! Do you know what it's like with no lube?! Yah.. think about that.
Me being CONSTRUCTIVE- always lube before entry and write better.
Me being CONSTRUCTIVE- always lube before entry and write better.
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June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please write more soon!
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it please do more chapters and write more fanfiction And do more chapters about Kagome and Sango.
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know that Shippo is rather whoreish (is that a word?) in my last chapter, but you have to look at it this way: he doesn't really understand sex, only that he really enjoyes it, and other characters seem to shun it. (sigh) anyway, I don't really know if I'm going to continue anymore- I just thing that it would be hard to keep Shippo innocent, and I'm afraide that he may turn into a nymphomaniac! Becides, I have a new addiction now: Fruits basket! I just read volume 1-6, and my favorite auther is now Natsuki Takaya!
Keep an eye out, i'm thinking of a one-shot with Shippo and Souta (I said this before) And hopefully I can stay more in-character this time!
Rin might be there, too.
Keep an eye out, i'm thinking of a one-shot with Shippo and Souta (I said this before) And hopefully I can stay more in-character this time!
Rin might be there, too.
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well you might not like the idea but if you want a kagome/shippo chapter you could have shippo use his transforming powers to make his penis bigger. It'd make sense if it was either inuyasha or miroku's size since those are the only ones he has seen from what I can tell although its a little big(still fine with me though). I mean otherwise its just oral really since that about all they can do. Oh well nice story keep it up.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was pretty good but shippo is a whore in this!!
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the good reviews! It's my first, and I was afraide that it would come off as "disgusting" by the readers. Lygger, i would olve to read you'r story, but alas! I cannot access your list, and I do not know the name.
Hey, I need advice for a kagome chapter. How could it be instituted? Remember, I am trying to stay in character. Also, I plan to follow the story so far, so it has to make sence.
Other than that, if anyone has any requests for future Shippo pairings, I will try to fit them in.
God Im glad my pen name isn't bob anymore... I didn't really know what the penname was at the time... but now I ramble on, keeping you fron your readings! Have fun!
Hey, I need advice for a kagome chapter. How could it be instituted? Remember, I am trying to stay in character. Also, I plan to follow the story so far, so it has to make sence.
Other than that, if anyone has any requests for future Shippo pairings, I will try to fit them in.
God Im glad my pen name isn't bob anymore... I didn't really know what the penname was at the time... but now I ramble on, keeping you fron your readings! Have fun!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice. please read mine. it's nice to see a story where shippo is young, but it doesn't come off really sick