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EXCELLENT AGAIN!! MUST HAVE MORE!!! This is an excellent plot line!

Good chappie! I can't wait until Ayame gets whats coming to her. I would like nothing more than to see Kagome slap that bitch but I know she would never put herself on Ayame's level. I think that Sesshoumaru and the others should suffer more for putting Kagome through all that, especially after finding out her little girl died. I really hope that Kagome doesn't just run back into all their arms after this. Oh, I also liked the reference about Keiko boyfriend always missing and falling for Kuwabara, that got a giggle. Can't wait for more!! >^..^<

Sugoi!!! I love it ^_^, keep up the good work "nods"

Wow, so far so good. I usually don't read AU but this one is good. I hope Kagome makes Sesshoumaru look like a damn fool and put Ayame in her place. I hate her character, she has got to be my least favorite female character of the whole series, so any Ayame bashing is ok in my book. Can't wait for the next chappie.>^..^<

ooohhh this is good so far i want more. please update again soon.

*Laughs* Maury? That's cute. This chapter was pretty good. The idea was too (though talk shows use it WAY too much). You got pretty much everything that goes on on Maury's paternity test episodes (though not everyone starts fighting on Maury, that's more Jerry Springer's style). I hope that at least Bankotsu and Koga appologize and volunteer to help Kagome out with the baby once they all realize she was telling the truth. Inutaisho'll know the truth as well and you should make him feel obligated to give both Kagome and the pup something for her trouble(s). Well, that and angry/ashamed of Sesshomaru.

Speaking of which, what's the boy's name? PLEASE don't name him Junior, or some freaky combination of Kagome and Sesshomaru's names [with -maru at the end]. It never comes out right (and the names rarely make sense). Oh, how old is Sango's baby girl? The girls weren't pregnant at the same time, were they?! Mou...

Just some questions I didn't see addressed in the first chapter: Well, I want to know how Ayame and Sesshomaru got together? It's a little weird - though I have seen a few fics -- none that I've read-- with that couple. And who/where are Kagome's friends (since Kikyo's her cousin)? Is it just her and Sango? Or are Yuka, Eri and Ayumi there? Oh yeah. How old are the characters? Is Shippou around? And lastly, what's Sango's daughter's name?

Ok... I think that's it...

Please update when you can... *wavies*

~Animefreak242
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Kawaii Girl

EDIT: One more thing... I know that canines can't smell emotions, but shouldn't Sesshomaru (not to mention Inuyasha, Koga, Ayame, even Inutaisho at the very least) been able to smell the similarities between Sesshomaru and Kagome's child? ...Unless Ayame had someone cover it up? Like maybe... KAGURA!

-Hey, you said Naraku is Sesshomaru's friend? WHY?! God... I can't see them ever getting along (even if are OOC).-

NOW I'm done. ^_^ *claps*

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl

WOW! that was a really good beginning, i love the idea of the jakutsu show like maury povich or jerry springer! it's so original and kool! anyways, i'm so happy that u made a new story! hope u update SOON! i really wanna knoe wats gonna happen next! keep it up!

oh my god!!! this is SO GOOD for the beginning =D I can't wait for the next chapter =) It's been SO long since I heard from you =D Haha, Sesshomaru's gonna get his ass kicked =D GO KAGOME!!!

man... i love this story.... please update soon